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nobody rates problem maps or example maps...

NEVER EVER compile without vis or RAD... without vis, entities will dissapear and without RAD, you wont get any lights...

The whole map has to be covered or it'll lag like a crazy bittch...

to reduce compile times, place the NULL texture on all unseen surfaces..

A simpler version of what was said

hmm. if i was english, i would be Year 10.

Here in Scotland i'm 3rd year.
we do 7 years primary and then 6 in secondary

lol, sweeet

good god habboi!

'although I don't think it's my best work, it is a rather nice map'

No need to be modest! its amazing!

your skill as a source mapper really shines!

very easy, gameplay was pretty boring...

+ It really showed off HL2's fantastic AI... The phrase 'nowhere to hide' comes into thought.

- you could fall off the edge of the map

- 2-D skybox

- No point having a jeep on such a small map

+ R-speeds were fine

- No crowabar or Gravity gun

- All items in supply crates were Batteries

Overall, a very good first attempt but not a very good map...

You've taken a good step into source mapping. Keep at it

download doesnt work m8

do u run RAD? there is no discernable reason why ur ligths dont work

and stop voting ur own maps (or getting friends to do it)

hahaha! leak alert! leak alert!
check ur compile log for the map and look forthe word 'LEAK!'

did u even add a light?

this is fucking awsome.. its my personal fav of all ur source maps

hehe... it is indeed helpful... perhaps you could create a real map (but small) showing this in its best form... like a mini ravenholm.. that sorta thing

ACK! the r_speeds were terrible.. worst iv come across on all of your maps.. good detail tho

yeah, i didn't find the r_speeds too bad and i have a pretty poor system but whateva... very cool... looks great and i especially like the hl flag/banner things thhat you can just see in the screenie.

brill for a first map... of course not as good as your current stuff but still good.

great texturing but bland bland lighting

lol... funny stuff... its surprisingly detailed... i like it

without bsp it should be in un-finished maps

upload the .bsp or nobody will play

no... my compo mapped sucked even worse than this

cos of the ending..

lol, and was it you that gave it 5stars?

yay, thanks for a good review, habboi...

and you need to use the black ops to your advantage to save barney

3 is very different.. a metal crate lands on your head and then spikes come up from the floor

*shudders at the thought of how long it took to compile

now what ya shoulda done would be to do a 5 star maps bit in the map vault and shove screenies of all ur maps in there and also made a profile page/room and shoved yer profile in there.. i didnt expect it but the gameplay is actually pretty awsome but i have one major complaint..

u didnt mention ur best mate the hunter... dangit man.. we've been awsome friends for... 2 secs. AND YOU DIDNT MENTION ME?!?!?!? me cries

heck, i dont even know you and im still super-sad your leaving.. good lluck in the 'real' world mate.

stumbles blindly in fear AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!

Mis-aligned textures, repeating textures, horrible friggin textures! AAAAAAAH

hey, just cos me and habboi are having webcam sex doesnt mean we always work together....

they're awsome!!! room is the funniest...

'i think its rather stimulating... dont you?'

stop... take a deep breath and ask yourself 'why am i making a mod?' think about it... Your first project... is.. a... mod... WTF?! make loads of maps.. get better... learn the system.
You shouldnt even consider making a mod unless you can AT LEAST make a ladder..

I am sorry if i sound mean but seriously, save this gem till later. Start on small prjects

just reading the map description - you say its trying to stay away from icworld (an fy map) then you say its a small deathmatch map, THEN in the screenshots their are weapon placements and finally in the name it says de!

So what is it?
an fy_, a de_ or a dm_

attack of the floracant lambs

im dissappointed, you guys shouldnt comment from screensie alone...

btw, how many maps were before 1st submitted cos they're right, it does look good

lol, i think every mapper has thought of making a map based around a bridge at somepoint.. lol.. its pretty good btw

by the screenshot it looks fullbright...

yuk

really really nice and good luck from me as well... make sure you dont ruin too much before the finished version come out.. we want some surprise

it is great fun to waste away the minutes but its really blocky.. work on your architecture.

This is the greatest and best map in the world... Tribute...
Long time ago, me and my god seventh, he was makin a map, a long-and-a lonesome map.... All of a sudden, there shined a shiny light_environment.. In the middle... Of the map... AND HE SAID! mmmmaaaake the best map in the world, or i'll eat your soul....
Well me and seventh, we looked at each other... AAnd we each said.... 'okay'
And he made the first thing that came to his head - just so happened to be - the best map in the world, t'was the best map in the woooorld. Look into his eyes and its easy to see 1 and 1 make 2, 2 and 1 make three, it was destiny... Once every hundred thousand years or so when the sun doth shine and the moon doth glow and the grass doth groooooow...

Needless to say... The light was stunned. Whip-Crack went his avatar, and the light was doneth...

He asked us 'Be you angels?' and we said 'NAY! WE ARE BUT MAPPERS' UUUUUHUUUUUHU OOH AHH AHH! AOHOHOH! A OHOHOH AU OHOHOUIO' This is not, the greatest map in the world - no - this is just a tribute... Couldnt remember the greatest map in the world - nooo - this is just a tribute ahh - to the greatest map in the world alllright - to the greatest map in the world alllright - twas the best and the greatest map in the world aaahh- flip fega doobee doo daa flibabeeba ba dooba fligabee ba ba doo ba - and the peculiar thing is this, my friend, the map was made on that faitful night, it didnt actually look anything like this map - THIS IS JUST A TRIBUTE, you gotta believe me and i wish you were there, tis just a matter of opinion oh motherfuck! good god, you gotta love him, im so surprised to find you cant stop him, im finally raining down on this motherfuckin map yeeeahh!!!! alright!!!! alright!!! Greatest map in the wooooorld.. oooooh

MUAAHAHAHAHAHA

its the new Hitchhikers guide with anti j-j-j-j-j-j-j-j-j-j-j-jog jog jog jog jog jog jog jog jog software instaled

twas very good.. no bugs i found however i only played with 1 other person... anyone tell us what its like with lots of people?

Anyway great job.. 5 stars from me as well.

i'll host if u want habboi.. i got webspace

sorry for double post..

have a pan galactic gargle blaster, read the hitchhikers guide and then remake them all.. at use VM on them. add something that really MAKES the map

well im sorry but these maps are all so... square.. no detail whatsoever and each looks as if it was made in less that an hour.. and then submitted instead of fixing the bugs

exquisite??? ooooh fancy that!

N1 btw trapt.. I think you should make a mice map out of it.... Like mice_study

Okay, here we go!

Its brilliant!
There were four problems i noticed.

1. There is a space in the name!!!ack!
2. The lighitng is HORRIBLE! sooo bright! tone it down a bit.
3. The fan is not going at a fast enough speed by the time the railing goes back into the wall. delay that.
4. The little bit on top of the gun doesnt move with it...

This is however a fantastic example of many great techniques and it just gets that extra 'oomph' because its killin scientists!

awsome for a first map!!! keep it up!

first map chicken_man!
We weren't all born with your super talent of making HL1 maps look like HL2 >:(

and btw, smash, your on the right track. Keep at it.