Well, I see someone read the "In The Beginning" tutorial series. This is pretty good for a first map, with the monster_maker added. Very nice! Since it's your first map, I'll give a good rating. 4/5 stars. You're on your way!
That map is crap. It took me about an hour to figure out how to get into the water room. And whats up with the constant damage? I picked up the antidote, but I was still being damaged. This map really sucks! I would give it 0/5, but 1/5 is the min.
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Commented 19 years ago2004-07-15 03:09:58 UTC
in vault item: Monster (Tour of Duty)Comment #2717
No description, no screen? I'm not going to waste my computer's space with a map that has no identity. I'm not downloading it until you get at least a description.
Commented 19 years ago2004-07-14 15:52:40 UTC
in vault item: Intruder: CliffhangerComment #2705
Here's my review:
+Liked the breaking rocks. +Cool part at the end with func_ladder. +-Waterfall was OK... -Unrealistic (a floating cliff in the middle of nowhere?) Add some rocks at the bottom and sides to make it look like it's not floating. -A little too hard...
Commented 19 years ago2004-06-30 15:40:05 UTC
in vault item: The Big Tower of DeathComment #2539
You need you use textures that aren't crete, or at least the crete walls with cracks and detail, don't just use only 2 or 3 textures, use more. And stop posting maps that are just crap, take your time and make a good one.
+Nice architecture.
+Cool broken glass.
+-Good machine, but as gargantua said, it has no purpose.
-Too dark.
I give it a 4/5.
+Liked the breaking rocks.
+Cool part at the end with func_ladder.
+-Waterfall was OK...
-Unrealistic (a floating cliff in the middle of nowhere?)
Add some rocks at the bottom and sides to make it look like it's not floating.
-A little too hard...
Overall, I give it a 3 out of 5.