Commented 15 years ago2008-07-13 00:29:20 UTC
in vault item: de_Old_MiserysComment #16124
this map is very nice I must say, but this looked more like an aim map than a de map, the ambience is good and the map looks great, the displacement at the bottom is maybe a bit pointy. the light rays were nice too. Over all this is good stuff! I won't rate it since it's an experiment. Try expanding this into a full map perhaps?
Commented 15 years ago2008-07-07 12:11:02 UTC
in vault item: de_cakemaniaComment #16761
Nipper is a very famous mapper (but not really that good) who made plenty of fun maps, which all just had this fantastic feeling to them. Most people here would hate him.
Commented 15 years ago2008-06-29 00:57:45 UTC
in vault item: de_cakemaniaComment #16745
this map is so great, it reminded me of the nipper days and made me feel sad that they are long lost.
of course there are many flaws which you can probably spot for yourself. I am rating this map 4 stars because it made a certain style in CS that I just adore and can't explain in words.
Commented 16 years ago2008-01-16 00:07:05 UTC
in vault item: aim_labirint_finalComment #16247
The_(c)Striker ydon't be silly, if a CS map is good, people will not criticize it negatively. Take a look at MaMuS' map, he put a lot of effort into, it has a proper lay out, it probably took many weeks to complete. Many aim maps here can be made in a matter of minutes/hours.
Commented 16 years ago2007-12-25 06:37:30 UTC
in vault item: awp_ferreiroComment #16162
ok, I downloaded it on FPS banana and the map is very good, but there were some serious clipping issues, they could seriously screw up the level. You can easily exit the map by just jumping onto a path on the T side and running off the edge, and you can slide up the CT side where the waterfall is and just jump off and hide.
Commented 16 years ago2007-12-19 08:30:12 UTC
in vault item: Fy_VertstadtComment #16130
I am glad you chose to make a new kind of fy map, and I think this one could turn out nicely in game play. I wasn't too fond of the sprites to be honest but I thought everything else was nice. There was an odd clip though that seemed useless. 4 stars and I would say the nicest fy map I have ever seen.
Commented 16 years ago2007-08-12 23:41:19 UTC
in vault item: de_monComment #15552
your style is blocky to me, but I fucking love it. I am going to get my friend to host this map on his server, because it deserves internet multiplayer. One thing I didn't like where the way you textures underwater. But seriously this map deserves a 5 star rating since I would give it 4.7 or something. Good job.
Commented 16 years ago2007-07-22 03:40:01 UTC
in vault item: Cs_UrbanBendComment #15403
srry it isn't necessary at all to tell someone they won't get 5 stars. Even if they won't. (I'm not saying you won't ghetto) I am impressed by your improvement. The water looked a little square in some parts of the river, manipulate different areas to make the waters edge a little more roundish, it looks much nicer. I say try getting some custom material into your next map, models, sprites and some sound of course. Sound is EXTREMELY important in a good map. I am giving you 3.5 which just happens to have to be a 4.
Commented 16 years ago2007-07-11 07:49:44 UTC
in vault item: aim_snipe-itComment #15330
Fuck up srry. This is a beginner site, so he can get feed back for his first map. Back on topic, you just have to move on from under-detailed one hour maps, people wanna see something impressive, you should line up your brush work and vary the textures, fix up that glass too. Also fix the ladders appearance. It's not a bad start, you are already learning about some useful entities. I won't give you a star because it wouldn't be justice, this being your first map and all.
Commented 16 years ago2007-07-10 02:12:52 UTC
in vault item: Unfinished cs_urbanbendComment #15312
May I suggest making the fence a func_illusionary and then putting a clip brush the same size over it, just so you can shoot through it. also there is an intersecting face. fix it, otherwise decent!
Commented 16 years ago2007-06-01 05:19:31 UTC
in vault item: aim_oldzoneComment #15026
RESOLUTION IS PERSONAL PREFERENCE pros only use it because they got used to it due to the fact that some places may not have been able to handle constant 99fps on high res.
Commented 16 years ago2007-04-24 07:39:21 UTC
in vault item: aim_a2_prisonyardComment #14722
Hunter brother, you have to remember this site is designed for beginners. Once they squeeze out their first map, usually aim or something or other, you have to send them in the right direction instead of laughing at them. Also Shizuka, TWHL tends to like it more when people try to express their creativity. I recommend trying a CS or DE map next, shouldn't be a huge challenge since you can already handle the size of kz maps.
Commented 17 years ago2007-03-31 22:27:12 UTC
in vault item: fy_beachComment #14543
It's really good that you included the ambiance sound with the map. You should practice your Vertex Manipulation and make the rocks a little more interesting, they umbrellas could be models or include a few more faces, toilets should be a little smaller, and the shore should be uneven. Also, I think the map would be ruined by campers, approaching from the water isn't easy, maybe you should make an inland path.
of course there are many flaws which you can probably spot for yourself.
I am rating this map 4 stars because it made a certain style in CS that I just adore and can't explain in words.
PS. simehong are you german?
I want to see the results on my desk by tomorrow morning.
perhaps a -wadinclude next time?
I want to see this map.
looks nice.
I am impressed by your improvement.
The water looked a little square in some parts of the river, manipulate different areas to make the waters edge a little more roundish, it looks much nicer. I say try getting some custom material into your next map, models, sprites and some sound of course. Sound is EXTREMELY important in a good map. I am giving you 3.5 which just happens to have to be a 4.