Fan Concerned Comic Created 18 years ago2006-07-27 14:02:50 UTC by halo4life

This is a fan Concerned comic I made. If you don't read Concerned you won't get it. I think this is a big improvement from my first comics.

Haha I couldn't tell the difference between who made it!

I just have to complain about the size.

600 k is too big.

Give the posing a 4/5
Humour 4/5

Heh.. Not bad..
I agree with DarkKilauea on the posing & humour, and yea - the size is a tad too big. Keep the size of any comic below 500kb.

I'd also give a 3/5 for the bubbles and sfx.
The outline of the bubbles was a bit too thick, imo, and the text was a tad too small.

Still - a very nice-loking comic.

Thanks for the comments!

I had a bmp one, and a jpg one. I decided to upload the bmp one because it wasn't over imageshack's size limit. That was stupid. I'll upload the jpg version.

Edit: jpg version:

posing and stuff and that 4/5
writing arghhhhhhhhhhh

Hahaha. Pretty funny.
It looks very authentic methinks you stoleth Livingston's mind............

They should fix the thing were you can only edit your most recent post. Here's a better version of the comic, the arm's fixed.