This is a comic that I made about a killer Ronald McDonald. I linked to the images because they were so huge.
1
http://static.filefront.com/images/personal/h/halo4life/46253/dcythmzmxw.jpg
http://static.filefront.com/images/personal/h/halo4life/46253/aldghpfcit.jpg
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http://static.filefront.com/images/personal/h/halo4life/46253/wjozrhcoew.jpg
Murderous McDonalds 1 and 2
Created 18 years ago2006-08-02 20:48:02 UTC by
halo4life
Created 18 years ago2006-08-02 20:48:02 UTC by
halo4life
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-02 20:48:02 UTC
Post #192316
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-02 21:22:04 UTC
Post #192318
It woulda been 100 x better if what they said wasnt so crappy.
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-02 21:56:10 UTC
Post #192319
The poses don't fit the dialouge (ie, where the lady was screaming after the scientist's head fell off, it looked as if she was yawning.) Plus the plot was kinda bland.
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-03 07:29:35 UTC
Post #192334
Not that bad, in my opinion. Sure, some of the posing was awful, but it's a fairly amusing idea. Also, comedy-horror is rarely seen in G-mod comics.
The best scene was definitely when she called the police. Gotta love the barney look on that one.
Good job, in any case, keep it up. Try to improve your posing, by just trying to make it more realistic. There are some G-mod posing tutorials out there (on PHW-Comics, if I'm not mistaken), read up on it. Also, the plot could use some work. And.. the dialogue.
The best scene was definitely when she called the police. Gotta love the barney look on that one.
Good job, in any case, keep it up. Try to improve your posing, by just trying to make it more realistic. There are some G-mod posing tutorials out there (on PHW-Comics, if I'm not mistaken), read up on it. Also, the plot could use some work. And.. the dialogue.
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-03 07:35:55 UTC
Post #192336
Haha! nice work man! Could you send me the skin with ronald mcdonald?
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-03 07:37:15 UTC
Post #192337
It's funny how the house tries to resemble Kaufmann House...
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-03 08:14:47 UTC
Post #192339
Heh...I actually thought it was 'your' Kaufmann House...
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-03 18:18:20 UTC
Post #192370
Terrible.
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-03 18:43:20 UTC
Post #192374
Bad posing... And the same main character in both? The dialog isn't good.
But having ronald mcdonald as a killer makes me love it!
..and yeah, im a B-movie fan, this is a B-comic, i like it.
<-- imagen that finger being a thumb!
But having ronald mcdonald as a killer makes me love it!
..and yeah, im a B-movie fan, this is a B-comic, i like it.
<-- imagen that finger being a thumb!
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-03 19:07:21 UTC
Post #192377
Terrible.You never give good comments. Why is it terrible? And Rednik, the model is in Sharks Character Mod.
Edit: What I meant by good comments is that he never says anything that will help me improve.
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-04 13:16:21 UTC
Post #192443
Barney made me go lol.
However, quite sick in a way.
BUT
If you try to make a comic out of something else I bet it would be much better
However, quite sick in a way.
BUT
If you try to make a comic out of something else I bet it would be much better
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-04 17:20:49 UTC
Post #192476
The dialogue really was daft...
Posted 18 years ago2006-08-05 05:39:38 UTC
Post #192529
Not bad, there are a few things that need to be tweaked here and there. But i love the idea of a child icon going on a murderous rampage 
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