fy_tropicworld

How come that the sand stands up vertecly with no container,it doesn't look right. The water hole is too squarish and the map is fullbright!

you forgot to say that it's boxy

Whoops! Is that the map you wanted someone to draw you an outlay? For what I can say that most of the out lays we would give you will be too much complicated for you,Well atlist my one! Look at my example maps for I have two that are enviormental they may help you although they are both for Hl1!

Elon, the water hole is a pool, last time i checked, post pools are spuarish. And that sand sticking up are small walls, I didnt want to leave my map with only a floor.

Have you chacked my maps!?! Probebly not!

Why would I want to check your maps? They probly suck =P

By the way Elon, thanks for downloading the map before you critisize. GG.

Bleh not all maps are eye sights They are also for fun so don't forget it

Too boxy,, =/

Doesn't metter Kev! My first maps where worse and if you will keep learning and mapping you will become a great mapper!

ive downloaded and lookad at the map through editor and camera. This is way too boxy, there's no real design in this. If this is your first map then its a good try. But you'll need to hone your skills in architecture. Apart from that and its full brightness. Its a decent map

kev, do you even know what gg means? and the walls REALLY dont look like walls and if that body of water would be a pool shouldnt there be some kind of CONCRETE or BRICK that seperates it from the sand?

ok...

try making a small fy_tropic_island instead with no outter wall except some water. for the middle parts, come up with some nicely shaped rocks, maybe some terrain for the pool in the middle. also, find a palm tree model for some splash in the boredomness. if you need a good tree model, download this map and use them trees models from it. other than that, work on it and try to raise the bar on fy_maps.

link to map: http://twhl.co.za/mapvault_map.php?id=3159

This map got accepted to 3 sites so far.

http://csm2.net/view_map.php?map_id=1750

http://www.csbanana.com/?section=viewitem.maps.maps.main.6894

http://www.cs-maps.org/index.php?page=new.php

Yep like all maps are so it's nothing to be proud of

i would comment on the sky looking nice.. then i noticed it was a box.. ah well..

This thing looks like it took 3 minutes to make... Don't get descouraged though!

Any map can get accepts Kev lol...