sk_bombplanting

lol you take 3 time's to have a screenie in the map vault

/me nominates map to be deleted.

reasons

1) 3 textures
2) its. a. box
3) commented on own map
4) no map description
5) wtf is sk_?

I hate to see people map like this.

c'mon guys, he's learning.

Sarwan: Practice mapping some rooms and try some common objects.

Stairs, door frames, balconies, platforms, catwalks, Light fixtures, trims, arches, etc.

Also, try some of these great tutorials.

http://twhl.co.za/tutorialbrowse.php?tuttype=1

What the hell were you thinking while submitting this map!Is this your 1st map?

Good job bashing the new mappers Saco i bet you feel warm inside.

i give it a 2
for reasons that its better than most of my early stuff

Go look at a picture and make it a map, it'll help you get a general idea for proportion, detail, and how architecture is. If you're going for abstract maps, make some crazy stuff with vertex manipulation with angles and curves and stuff.

Sarwan, write a decent discription next time.

Ffs, it's a first fucking map. The guy needs some advice and you fuckers come in and start bashing it, instead of helping.. That's goddamn stupid.

@Hunter: de_spaceship3 ring a bell? :

I won't move this to the unfinished vault, just because it's a 1st map, that is quite well-made for a FIRST MAP.

@Sarwan: Good work. I can't say that the map is very good, since it still needs some better texturing and architecture. Add more textures and other things, like Rimrook said. And post a better description next time.

You took up the 900th map with this shit!?
Just do what these guys said and improve...

Trust me I have to be harsh to be nice since everyone esle did the same to my first map and look at me now! I am a retard!

I fully agree with Daubster & Rimrook.
Take notice from what they said, as for the rest, ignore those..

I asked him?!! d'uh!?

exelcent

Better than my first string of maps, considering it's lit!

Some interesting shadows because of the surrounding wall and the holes in the ceiling. This might be a good frame for a "ruins" type map, with some ugly blown out wall textures, some wall fragments and debris props, and some sounds.

Some of what Hunter and the others has merit though--this map would never survive at Snarkpit methinks...

And though I understand the negative feelings, just keep reciting the mantra, straight from the father:

This is a learning site.
This is a learning site.
This is a learning site.

Don't post your first map.

Nah posting ur first map is ok if u put more effort int it. Its best to build on your original thought with your imagination wide open and ready for action