Commented 18 years ago2006-08-16 21:13:45 UTCComment #12861
well those chairs and lamps definetly are way to big, when mapping, I always use the "thirdperson" command to look at things next to myself and make them about the size they would be in real life. Kewl tags and stuff but you shouldnt put them all over the place if they dont add to the theme. Especialy those random pictures. Though the map was a little too open in my opinion it seamed like it would be a pretty fun dm map.
If so - tag it properly
I like the detail items like the lamps, the tiles and some other stuff. The chair models are scaled a little too big.
Nice triggerable ambients--bird sound by the door. Were there more?
The env_sound was a little wearing on the ears, and some volumetric light would have looked really nice in the "skylight" room.
Not your best work, but still a pretty decent dm, and it looks like the layout/weapon placement would be good.
BTW, are you Saribous' alter ego?
Nice map!
/nitpick
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