Commented 17 years ago2006-12-08 01:01:12 UTCComment #13626
i don't included the other boxes, just for sniping crate. you can rate and comment if you want. It is my 3rd map. I haven't seen any great textures but if i had it will be great.
Commented 17 years ago2006-12-08 01:59:42 UTCComment #13628
Good try for a 3rd map . Just a few things, it feels a bit empty maybe make it a bit smaller or try adding some better cover. dunno if its just me but its really hard to rescue the hostages, u have to drag them across a tiny little point on the ground ( i had to walk around the hostage zone about 10 times till i finally got them rescued) and there is a z-fighting error with the box in the ct's tower. but other than that it is a nice idea and a good try.
Commented 17 years ago2006-12-10 02:06:16 UTCComment #13645
Compliments first:
+You provided the correct directory structure!!1 Many verterans don't even do that *win +No major errors, entities competently set up. +Fine layout for a fy/aim etc.--is that the same as cs_deathmatch? +The pushables are a nice addition, and better yet they give me an idea for my own fy map!!
Criticisms: -Blocky. Try rounding of corners, and adding trims and detail work. Blocky also means everything is generally too thick/unrealistic. -one or both of your ladders is intersecting the wall--looks bad. -You used 4 additional wads and the whole map has 4 freakin' textures!!1 You couldn't find anything in the whole half-life or cstrike wad that would work for this simple map!? (joking, but really )
I think that's about it. Nice work for a beginners map... good job!
+You provided the correct directory structure!!1 Many verterans don't even do that *win
+No major errors, entities competently set up.
+Fine layout for a fy/aim etc.--is that the same as cs_deathmatch?
+The pushables are a nice addition, and better yet they give me an idea for my own fy map!!
Criticisms:
-Blocky. Try rounding of corners, and adding trims and detail work. Blocky also means everything is generally too thick/unrealistic.
-one or both of your ladders is intersecting the wall--looks bad.
-You used 4 additional wads and the whole map has 4 freakin' textures!!1 You couldn't find anything in the whole half-life or cstrike wad that would work for this simple map!? (joking, but really )
I think that's about it. Nice work for a beginners map... good job!