Commented 15 years ago2009-07-29 13:49:01 UTCComment #8396
The map looks like it would be pretty fun but has a few things that could have been different. The halls and rooms are all huge with not that much stuff in them. Lighting imo is either too bright in some areas or just too dark "pitch black". The textures are kinda boring and the map lacks any ambience. The weapon placement is alright but you could probably add more. The big room with the rpg is pretty cool looking but like every other room, its just a big one with boxes in it. You definitly have what it takes to make a fun deathmatch map but take what ive said into consideration for your next map. Put more detail into your hallways. Don't light everything super bright. Don't limit yourself of bland textures. Use different colored lighting. Build more rooms that arent just squared. Either way this map pobably would be kinda fun.
Commented 15 years ago2009-08-02 19:52:02 UTCComment #6412
Well, it's functional but there is plenty of room for improvement. To be honest, it's very underwhelming.
+Warehouse boxes looked nice +Very large map -No sounds -No interactivity Incredibly boxy and empty in most areas- Try working on your corridor architecture for the future. -Awful choice of textures -All lights were white -All lights were point lights
your description lacks content.
+Warehouse boxes looked nice
+Very large map
-No sounds
-No interactivity
Incredibly boxy and empty in most areas- Try working on your corridor architecture for the future.
-Awful choice of textures
-All lights were white
-All lights were point lights
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