WIP: de_latin Created 19 years ago2004-07-03 10:08:05 UTC by ZombieLoffe ZombieLoffe

Created 19 years ago2004-07-03 10:08:05 UTC by ZombieLoffe ZombieLoffe

Posted 19 years ago2004-07-03 10:08:05 UTC Post #38489
A unfinished aztec/piranesi styled map I thought i'd show off.
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Comments? suggestions?
Posted 19 years ago2004-07-03 10:25:13 UTC Post #38492
1. picture: Too empty. You could make the temple thingy larger. Also remove the black wall, put something onto the room.
2. picture: Also too empty and the walls look a bit noobish. Put something on the top to make them less boring.
3. picture: The bevel at the bottom of the wall/pillar should be removed.
4. picture: Put some lights in there. And maybe some furniture.
5. picture: Change the texture of the red wall.
6. picture: Some torches might make it look less empty.
7. picture: Quite ok. If r_speeds allow it, you could place a trolley and a bevel around the exit in the wall.
8. picture: The wall in the background looks a noobish too. You could hang some wall carpets on the left wall.
9. picture: Again the walls and the emptiness. More plants could fix that. The two lower windows look a bit misplaced.

All in all it looks like a good start. You should now start to add detail.
Posted 19 years ago2004-07-03 11:33:25 UTC Post #38498
first picture is the worst compared to the rest :(
Posted 19 years ago2004-07-04 01:44:28 UTC Post #38611
by Hazardous!
All in all it looks like a good start. You should now start to add detail.
Everyone is entitled to their opinion... ;)

But from the screenies it looks good. The big test is not "how it looks" but "how it plays".
Posted 19 years ago2004-07-04 02:43:14 UTC Post #38622
Not bad. It definitely needs more detail, but lookin nice for a WIP.
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Posted 19 years ago2004-07-04 03:39:01 UTC Post #38624
The middle screens are the best ones.
Seventh-Monkey Seventh-MonkeyPretty nifty
Posted 19 years ago2004-07-04 07:59:26 UTC Post #38676
Nice work there Mr.Loffe.
m0p m0pIllogical.
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