Yet another story Created 19 years ago2004-08-10 21:52:09 UTC by Floater619 Floater619

Created 19 years ago2004-08-10 21:52:09 UTC by Floater619 Floater619

Posted 19 years ago2004-08-10 21:52:09 UTC Post #49953
Full Moon
by:
Floater619
I hear the alarm clock wring. I knew it's time for school,
i walk to school, same as everyday. But when i get home i notice
new people are moving into the house next-door. I see alot of luggage
being lifted in, and one peculiar item caught my eye, a Silver Medal, it
was left in the moving van, and the owner did not come out for it, so the
guy in the moving van hollared, hey come out here you forgot your medal,
so the guy comes out, the guy in the moving van hands it to him, the man
says ahh!! take it away, keep it i dont want it!!! and looks away. The guy
in the moving van says, Okay mister. And drives along. Now, i was pondering
to myself why he wouldn't want a silver medal. So the next day i go to
school yet again, and notice the guy is out in the yard, i go up to him and
say, hello, he doesn't say anything back. So i just turn away and walk
home, shaking my head and saying to myself, weird guy. So the next night
their's a full moon outside, so i decide to take a walk. Once i come back
i notice my neighbors door is flayling wildly, so i go to shut it, and holar
hello! i'm just going to shut the door, but nobody answers, so i shut the
door. And decide to make another lap around the neighbor hood, i stop
by the woods and look up at the moon, i hear HOWLLLL!!! a wolf's
howl. so i go into the woods, and theres something running around
in their, of muscular form. so i decide to check it out.
A camper, camping in the woods 5 years later:
You know, they said the guy that killed him was never found, all that
was left of the guy, was shredded organs and body parts. that
night they hear, HOWL!!!
to be continued...
Posted 19 years ago2004-08-10 21:59:20 UTC Post #49956
the text is kindof messed up because i copied and pasted from notepad.
Posted 19 years ago2004-08-10 22:04:22 UTC Post #49958
Yes just like mine when u copy and paste from notepad it gets screwed up, thats why I was complaining about formating. Well, your story is ok, but kinda like mapping its missing details. Everythin happened kinda fast and was hard to understand.
Posted 19 years ago2004-08-10 22:06:44 UTC Post #49959
Formatting issues occur because empty space does not get recognized and gets deleted.
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Posted 19 years ago2004-08-10 22:07:55 UTC Post #49961
From now on I will write it in word, looks like coolfats worked out well.
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