RPG ADVENTURE #1 [closed] Created 18 years ago2005-05-18 12:21:26 UTC by Archie

Seventh! Do it!
Buck Buck BUCK chicken noises

I suppose is saribous didnt bother to mention a benefactor then his heir can be anyone. Go ahead Merc if you want.

mercenary

Bad choice, seventh! This could have been your road to fame in the author's buisness! BUT YOU THREW IT AWAY! AND FOR WHAT?

Y'ato finds himself in a forest, an old forest. As he looked back he could see the portal closing. Now he understood there is no way back. Y'ato started walking. He didnt know where he should be going or where he is, he has to trust his senses. After a while he comes to body of water. This water, apart from the other water in the forest, was fresh and clean. He could see right to the bottom. He rested there for a moment untill he heard someone coming. He looked back quickle and saw a big man covered in armour from top to toe. The man looked angry and evil.
-Who are you? And what are you doing here?, the man asked.
-Dont you know that these water are the holy waters of the True Morphers?, he continued.
-I am Y'ato Brett a Morpher from the future, a good morpher. Y'ato answered.
-What do you mean with 'good morpher'?
-I mean that I'm not an evil morpher.
The man laughed a little and then said: "There aren't ay evil morphers".
-WHAT???!!!1, Y'ato yelled. How much back in time have I travaled, he thought for himself. Probebly to far!
-Well, enough chatting. I have to arrest you for touching these holy waters.
-But... but I have a mission to accomplish, Y'ato said while he started to run away.
Due to the many trees and the sun right into his eyes, Y'ato could see almost nothing. Then suddenly he saw normaly again. But he couldnt feel anything under his feet either. In the last nano second the man grabbed Y'ato and saved him from falling down the cliff. Now Y'ato had nothing but his clothes, and he was trapped in a cage that looked like it was built for animals. The cage was cowered with something so he couldnt see, but he heard people. It sounded like he was in a town...

The next writers is... hmm... who to choose... I chooooooooooose... Elon Yariv!!!!!!!

I already thought on an idea!!

Chapter 16 - The Arena

...Suddenly a bright light apeared and the cage's door opened. In the instent that Y'ato stepped out of the cage two armed morphers grabed him and forced him into the light. A foul stench of decay filled his nustreils and in front of him there lay thousand corpeses. As he entered the light there was a great appluse and thousand of morphers who sat above him ceared. In front of him a door opened and another morpher steped out of it. Y'ato then understood that his punishment was to fight in this arena!!! When the secound morpher entered the arena a voice ordered the two gladiators to fight or they will be throwen to the crocodailes!...

I'm not good at discribeing fights so M_gargantua you can continue it if you like!!!

oh, i'm good at fight scenes and i have a great idea welling so if u dont want to do it, gargy, just ask

Ok then The Hunter If you like to continue it then you can.

Thinking of it! It wont be fair for M_gargantua!! So if he doesn't add a chapter with in two days then you can add it Hunter.

go on then ill have a go, next person TAG ME!!!

into the light. A foul stench of decay filled his nustreils and in front of him there lay thousand corpeses.

Did he die?

M_gargantua will deside!

hehe! cant wait to see the next chap

I want to make one! but i can not prommis that everyone will like the change i whould do...

I would like the new writers to really read through the existing chapters so they won't stray too far away from eachother in terms of storyline.

Dont be afriad of new things, Saribous!

I'm not. I want a coherent story, not 1000 different stories

I read the storys and mercenery said he thought he was in a town! Anyway I wanted to make the good ones bad too for in realty everybody is bad!!

I've come to believe this story will be entirely impossible to create in HL1 or HL2. Unless we can make thousands of models for "morphing" it'll look terrible.

And you are a morpher too!!

Chapter 16 - Realisation

Y'ato mumbled something to himself, the full scale of traveling through time had finally hit him. When he first arrived, it had all seemed very natural. He took a drink, he admired the forest, he got abducted.
He gave a quiet sob at the mess he had got himself into.

Karaneena village, which he now realised he was being held captive was one of the most active market villages in the Southern land. Before the dark morphers arose, Y'ato would spend many a happy day here showing off his skills with his friends, entering tournaments or simply relaxing by the great fountain.

"HEY YOU!" Shouted the man that Y'ato had learned was named Bronan, "You're wanted in the arena again. The audience like you... Can't think why though, you piece of trash."

Y'ato had been in this time for four days now. Each day he would be dragged out and held in front of an audience of thousands. They would decide whether he was to fight... Or die.
Not surprisingly, after the first fight, the audience loved him...

***

Yato had stumbled at the mention of crocodiles, the other criminal that he was intended to fight looked just as scared but given the choices, Y'ato knew he must kill this man. And to be honest, when he entered tournaments when he actually belonged in this time, he had no problem killing his opponents... It just felt different now... After the war.
The croud were on their feet. Stamping and clapping and urging us on.
The other man was the first to act; he morphed into a salamander at a very mediocre evolutionary stage - the sort of thing they tought 12 year olds at school.
I pitied the man as i changed into my fully evolved pantherosis - a normal panther with metal for skin and tritanium claws. The fight was fast and brutal.

***

The second fight on the second day had been similar - the opposing criminal changing into a jaglet which is honestly no more than a housecat with sharper claws and teeth.
The third day had been harder - but still easy with Y'ato fighting a Skeletor. Very hard to kill but appaulingly slow.

With no fear, Y'ato climbed the steps that he had climbed three times before. He lowered the cheap bronze face mask that they provided to crowd favourites and awaited his gate to open.
He heard a cheer as the other man walked on. Thsi was rare - it must mean he would be fighting another crowd favourite.

the gate opened and there he saw Nemmerle. A distinctly younger Nemmerle but the same man no doubt.
they eyed each other and Y'ato couldnt help notice a glint of understanding in Nemmerle's eyes. He knew who Y'ato was and he knew why he was back in time...

96a2107

ROFL! I DID IT AGAIN! i keep typing the same chapter number! MINE WAS 17, okay?!

hey, it hasn't been 2 days yet.

and I had my part typed up to.

hmm, should I post mine anyway and see which one 96'er would like to continue from?

OR
96 can do the chap after you

M_gargantua is right only one day has passed! We can ignore Hunter's chapter or that 96a2107 should write chapter 19 and M_gargantua will write chapter 18!!! Anyway M_gargantua discribes battles better then you, Hunter!!
With all this evolotion it started to sound a little bit like pokemon, which is very bad!!!

a normal panther with metal for skin and tritanium claws. The fight was fast and brutal.

That's the only part that sounded like pokemon! Otherwise it was exiting (I know I spellt it wrong) to read.

The other man was the first to act; he morphed into a salamander at a very mediocre evolutionary stage

What about this?

They are morphers, duh!

Yeah go for it garg ill do the one after you

Yes, but he could have just said he morphed into a salamander!! Anyway the other parts were nice!!

Ok then The Hunter If you like to continue it then you can.

sorry.. thought i had permission :/

oh, and i mentioned evoltuionary satges because of the memory flashbacks in my last chapter... they spoke of Dragons at their last stage of evolution

Next time read the whole post!!!

Elon doesnt like me

remember that hunters doesn't count.

Ch 17 - Almost To Easy

Y'ato stood there. he didn't want to fight another morpher, only because the war had not started yet. a voice called out "let the fight begin.". the man turned into a bear, a giant grisly. Y'ato choose to take the form of a agile black panther. the power of the stone he had touched in the temple was still coursing through him, he belived it would probably remain there for the rest of his life. he used it and further enhanced his mucles. his opponent roared, and started charging to him.
Y'ato sprinted, his supercharged panther legs carrying him to over 70 kilometers and hour. his opponent stoped running and planted his legs apart and prepared for Y'atos attack. Y'ato had an idea and tucked his tail in, consealing it from the bears eyes. he turned the end of it into a scorpion stinger, poison and all. Y'ato moved to dodge between his opponents legs, clearly he had been expected to jump by his opponent, who awkwardly swiped down. Y'ato ducked lower and brought the stinger out and drove it into his opponents belly as he ran under him. the tip of the stinger ripped out of the rest and felt to Y'ato like he had broke his ass.
Y'ato turned and ,seeing his opponent gaging from the poison, turned back into his human form. he knew that the amount of poison a stinger that size would kill him within a few minutes, painfully at that. Y'ato was going to finish him to save him the pain but that voice called out again, saying "the difieler must be killed in punishment for drinking the sacred waters, finish him guards." Y'ato turned and saw to men jump out of a large both in the stadium walls. they turned into rinosorusis on the way down and landed hard. they were within twenty yards of him and they charged him, pincering him in a V.
Y'ato sprinted to the wall of the stadium his body still enhanced. the guards followed him, the ground thundering behind them. Y'ato jumped off the wall and turned 180 degrees. he hadn't jumped high and when he landed he took a step back, reaching his arms out and placing them on the wall. calling on his powers he reached into the sandstone, manipulating the molecules of it like he would his cells during a morph. stone shot out of the wall, impaleing the rinos. the entire stadium gasped, and broke out in wispers and exclamated conversations.
a man dropped down in front of him and, before Y'ato could do anything , smashed him on the underside of his jaw with a club. Y'ato broke out into stars as he heard the man say "the king wishes an audience with you." Y'ato half saw, half felt more guards drop down. the flurry of club stikes unrelenting, but the pain he felt didn't last long as he finished passing out.
Y'ato found himself chained to a wall, he could not exactly see in the dim lighing but he heard chanting around him. he looked down and saw a stange rune glowing under his feet. Y'ato tried to morph himself out of his bonds, but he felt a huge electrical shock move up him and place him in an agony so strong he could not. Y'ato was about to pass out again, but set himself against it and held his contiousness.
A door opened in the back of the room, hidden in the dim light from Y'atos eyes. the door close again and a siloete stepped into view. "that was a trasmutational morph you proformed, that is a forbiden and forgoten art." the figure said, "the only few who know how to proform them are either dead or with the rebels. and so you must be with those magot rebels, and for that you will die like you should have in the arena for your other crime. and im sure the world will be happy to be rid of you."
The door opened and closed again quickly. a figure hurried into the room and began speaking on his way to Y'ato. "King Leetus, you can't kill him, he is the one the prophecy speaks of."
"what do you know of this man priest, he is a befouler and a killer and a transmutist as well." the man in front of Y'ato replied.
The priest replied "but I cannot allow you to kill him sire, not until he is proven not to be the one the prophe..."
"You damn priests and that damn prophecy, you sound like those F#*%!&6 rebels. those rebels are always saying that when he comes is a signal that this entire kingdom will be cleansed and rebuilt, and they claim that they do not want to be part of This kingdom so they can help clense it of all its corruption." the king harshly stated, "but he will not die yet, if your nagging is true then he will be killed anyway."
"What do you mean killed any..." Y'ato began, but the kings hand smashed his head against the wall and he passed out again

96'r goes.

they always seem so short when i first type them in notepad.

I thought garg was just gonna do 18... Oh whatever...

oops, sorry, I missed my turn, I was away (not at home)

bah. i know its my fault but its really annoying i spent ages writing my bit :/ bugger. oh well.

ok 96a2107 .. whoose are you gonna continue?

Elon doesnt like me unhappy -

Thats because no1 likes Elon

Who said I don't like you,Hunter!! It was just annoying that you took M_gargantua chapter!! But it doesn't metter now!!

Damn Damn Damn Damn Damn, started and nearly finished my story straight into twhl and my shit peice computer froze up i havnt got time to do another one now because im moving so its gonna have to be left : im moving into a new srudent flat and its all a bit hectic, so looks like its on to...

random elected person --->

so... Whos elected?

how about madcow who missed his turn?

Whens my turn..! :

I'm still WAITING-->

Let's say it's unbreakable's turn for he haven't wrote a chapter for a long time!!!

Unbreakable

Who'se are you gonna continue? ... i think it'd be a good idea if the person who you don't continue should write the one after you, unb.

When I think about it, I aby should pass, my English isn't that great.. ^^
Wait another year!

Ohhh...thats not the continuing chapter! Well anyway I prefer M_gargantua's chapter!

Hunter just wants to go as often as possible...