Defcon 1

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i think this is a very good map for a first attempt
it has good texturin (mostly)
active environment
but the train area, there are white cylinders there , why? it doesnt fit the rest of the map, and the train track goes to nowhere, if u put a tunnel at each end but just make it a wall lookin like a tunnel with maybe no light it could look better
but still a good first map

You know, I never thought of putting some tunnels in there. That's a pretty good idea. I was considering getting rid of the whole train idea but I didn't want it to just have a wall going all the way around. As far as the white cylinders, they're fuel containers like the ones you see in the fuel room. Just simulating how the rockets get fuel delivered to them. Anyways, thanks for the tunnel tip. If I get enough feedback i'd definitely consider putting that in.

you should change the cyclinder from white to another colour though cos it look s as if you just forgot to texture them
and notihng in the real world is that white really, for long neway