Glass defence system

Bleh...this version doesn't work. Wait for the update.

Updated

The grunts were already dead when i hit the glass defence button, except for that guy doing something while you grab the gun. No fair! Yes....rollerskates. And Leaks in my maps are actually an artistic expression of my fractured consciousness. Bit messy lookin so far, could you maybe space everything out a bit? Camera made me a bit dizzy too! Still better than mine.

Just thought: could you not have the cam positioned so that you dont see the bottom half of the grunts legs?

I get an error 'No such sentence group BA_PQUEST' or something.

was no monsters ? and the wooden box right infront of you when you go down the lift is floating..

good.
though it looks like thos 'FRAGILE' crates are floating.
this is alot better than my entry.

my pros and cons:

+Good Architecture
+Pretty good camera work
+Good scripting
+You are being creative with glass.. good.
-Crates are floating above ground, didnt really bother me much though. still you should fix them.
-Rollerskates eh?, well you could have them brake the door, shoot the barneys and then run to the spot where the glas defense system is.

4 stars.

oook? how did you think of a zany idea like that :0

I hope I get points for originality.

its a little plain :/

Plain indeed.

+Quite nice architecture
+Somewhat creative
+Scripting is nice
+-Camera Work. It worked well, but wouldve been better if you wouldve actually seen the grunts get killed, instead of the glass falling on top of the camera then seeing the dead grunts on the floor.
-Really not much to do, and very easy.
-Button isnt very obvious
-You can kill the grunts without pressing the button, which stuffs it up. (barneys pistol)

3 stars

Lotta bugs, like the scientist sitting at the end doesn't even notice anything, that could've been changed. The grunts looked like they were sliding (because they were). Not good! I don't have time to give a pro/con review so let me just say 3/5 stars.

From my notebook, written during review:

Vassy's Defence System
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glass_vassy.bsp

+ Great enterance
+ Imaginative, if slight copy of SlayerA's LDF
- Somewhat poor, bland architecture