de_JrAztec

Goodies:
+ Good architecture
+ OK Layout (Some things disregarded when I say that)
+ I like what you have done with the walls at the top (even if they are a bit low, make them some percentage higher)

Baddies:
- MAJOR sky prolems (You can walk on top of the level and you dont have to use noclip to get there)
- Sky isnt clipped (basically you can swim the the sky around the level)
- Not many different textures
- Texture aligning problems (also try using a "trim" texture on the walls it would look much beter!)
- Only one bombsite
- Too empty in the flat areas where the grass is (just a few more crates can make it better)

Sorry if there are so many bad points more than good points but I am about to load up bots on this map because im sure the gameplay is fun!
I will post about the gameplay soon...

OK, so basically you need to learn about the clip brush, thats the biggest fault.
Playing with the bots was quite fun after I stopped sniping them from above cos i could walk along the top of the whole level and after I stopped sneaking up behind the shielded guys using the swimmable sky...
The layout is a bit small but it is fun to play because the layout is just nice...
I wouldnty change it too much just fix the problems and maybe make it a bit bigger, also make 2 bomb spots...

I`ll try to fix those thing you speaked of,especialy the sky problem,i`m a little out of ideeas about what more architecture can i do to make the map bigger.After that the sencondary bomb site shoud not be a problem to make it.Thanks for your suggestions Jax.

Ohh And sorry about speling or grammar mistakes,i don`t know english that well.

What language do u speak well?

Romanian

Ok i fixed the sky problem and the problem with the secondary bomb site.

Okies ill download later today and have a lil test run!