Unfinished cs_urbanbend

just because you're a hostage killer
im not lookin at this

Fine i changed the picture...

Ghetto to be honest...

i loved it great job

thanks , any opinions on how i could improve it?

I already told you in the map thread to fix the edges of the terrain, and even edited a screenshot to show you how. You didn't bother to do so.
In your map de_barren, I told you to give more variation to the height of the walls in yours maps. You barely bothered to do so. You really need to expand the visual area beyond the gameplay area if you want any realism in a map. And you don't need 3D skyboxes. It's possible with the hl1 engine.
The map is better than your previous work, but It would really help if you took our mapping advice a bit more seriously

this is an old screen shot, i changed it from the new one because tetsu0 didn't like a dead hostages body lying on the ground lol (my bad)

I took a look at the map ingame, and the places where the terrain met the walls seemed to be just like the screenshots shows...

O k , here we go!

uh ... but there is water, I'm not quite sure that it would matter any way because there is water! mm...

mmm... very nice

May I suggest making the fence a func_illusionary and then putting a clip brush the same size over it, just so you can shoot through it. also there is an intersecting face. fix it, otherwise decent!

I'll take a look at it.