Boxed in hell!

Thanks to whoever posted the screenshot...I was not sure how to do it. BTW...this is my first map and only spent probably 5-6 hours on it. I know it's probably boring compared to a lot of others but we are having a heck of a lot of fun playing it at work. Any comments, suggestions both positive and negative will be appreciated. I plan on making more maps and need all input. Thanks (since I have to rate my own map...)

iam cheking it out now

well...what do you call boring ...indeed i think it's boring but i was runing alone around in ti if your with 5-6 players then you hsould have a lot of fun. and for your first map it itsnt bad. keep up the good work only5-6 hours is a long time for such a small map i must say but because it's your first map it iant that bad

btw i rated it a 3 star(dont now how it is with a buch of people and oz deathmatch, i play rocket crowbar)

Nice little killbox with decent action. Plenty of weapons... added half a dozen bots and it was a fragfest! It needs improvements but I didn't delete it yet, 3 stars.

- It needs a clip brush for the top, I was blasted right onto the top of the walls.
- Could use more detailed architecture... braces under catwalks, pillars for bridge, better "shield for ladder.

+ Jump-pack rocks!
+ Simple layout, very easy to make bot files.

The wall was missing. There's also some straight up odd design choices, from oddly emphasizing lights to not-quite-two-way paths. In general, just another of many boxes in which Half-Life stuff happens. Not really remarkable when put that way.