Thanks so much for the feedback. Seriously you guys have got me stoked now. I'll tell you guys what I didn't like. I wanted more sounds, for instance for each large red beam I wanted a large blast sound but I couldnt make it happen. I wanted more walls torn apart by lasers. I wanted it to be a three part series with a long elevator ride taking you to the chamber and a longer destination after the teleport. It does seem to begetting ready for something big and then it just comes to a halt. As for brushes, not so great. Sigh...I had a number of opfor and blueshift wads used that I had to change out with less spectacular half life wads. Thanks again for feedback