FUCK SAKES!
IM GETTING SICK AND TIRED OF ALL THE RUDE COMMENTS PEOPLE ARE LEAVING! YOU GUYS NEED ALOT MORE HELP THAN AWKOOK, YOU THINK YOUR BETTER BECAUSE YOU BEEN AROUND THE COMMUNITY FOR A LONG TIME NOW! WELL THAT MEANS DICK ALL YOU INSENSITIVE PRICKS! NOW SHUT THE HELL UP!! YOUR FUCKING LUCKY IM NOT ADMIN OR I'D BAN EVERY FUCKIN' ONE OF YAS!
HAVE RESPECT, GIVE RESPECT, RECIEVE RESPECT YOU WORHTLESS PIECES OF SHIT!
OK, now. Awkook, the maps need alot of work but your main focus as Rimrook mentioned would have to be proportion. A good method for this would be to try to keep all the texture scales around 1.00 or below. When I map all my textures are .8 and lower.. And I use that as my base for walls and such, but for doors I use the info_player_start as mentioned by Rimrook.
Another thing is that the map seemed very random, you introduced characters way too quickly, try sticking with certain characters for a while then add new ones.
Also I noticed that most of your light had no sources, so be sure to add that as well. Other than that bud, keep on mapping.
The comments are made towards members who have nothing better to do then discourage an early mapper. If thats not you, sorry for my outburst.