small update
Here's Imengo, a commander of the Human detachment of military.
The player, yaarr!
Same but I didn't finish the coloring. I hate that style anyway but it still looks nice.
Decided to change the commander from Seidon to Imengo because the name was no longer fitting his character. However, the head scientist of the civilian science team that's traveling with the military detachment will be named Seidon.
Also, set up the factions correctly. Try to follow along
You Has:
The Player
Navengers
Human Military
Human Science Team
Proving Ground AI
The player is allied with the Navengers and the human science team but nothing else.
The Navengers are allied with only the Player, they hate all humans.
The Human military is allied with only the science team.
The AI is only allied with the science team.
A good conflict is the internal squabbles among the military and science teams on the human's behalf. The player's alliance with the science team upsets the Navengers, which believe all human have the same motive to take over after the military fucked up relations commanded by the arrogant asshole Imengo. And of course, the science team developed the proving ground AI so they have full clearance that the player may use to an advantage.
Setting that up adds a lot to how the player will interact with certain characters. Makes it easier on my part thinking of events and such, getting in to the character's minds a little bit.