RPG ADVENTURE #1 [closed] Created 19 years ago2005-05-18 12:21:26 UTC by Archie

Righto, ive seen this on a few other forums and it works really, really well.
Basically, I start a story (a real story) and then at the end of my chapter, I add the name of the person i want to continue it. If they dont continue it within 2 days then someone else can... okay.. here we go...

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CHAPTER 1 - A new beginning

Y'ato started running. He didn't look back, knowing what he would see.
A growl startled him but only makes him run faster - the beast must be morphing into something worse.
A curb. He trips and badly slashes his knee on the lumpy pavement.
Y'ato cursed silently before shakaly picking himself up and finally looking behind him. He had been right - The Beast was now representing something that looked like a giant wolf. At least 9ft tall and double the length with teeth as big as Y'ato's arm.

Scared out of his mind, Y'ato tried to start running again but it was useless. The great mass loomed over him and roared.

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Seventh Monkey

Not my style of writing. Sorry. I pass to SariBous.

CHAPTER 2 - Confusion

Y'ato closed his eyes, in a few seconds the beast would devour him. His head ached from the impossibility of it all, why had he been dragged into this nightmare?

As minutes passed, Y'ato began to wonder why the beast hadn't killed him. A gentle breeze caressed his cheek in a soothing way, Y'ato took a deep breath and opened his eyes to find himself sitting in the sand of a beach.

Unable to grasp the situation, Y'ato looked for any familiar sign, something that would give him some clues to help solve this riddle. He was alone on the beach, only the wind which seemed to be whispering to him could be heard. Far away in the distance burned a fire..

Y'ato got up and started walking towards the small light.

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Get to it Brattylord

CHAPTER 3 - Unknown Lands

Y'ato had been walking toward the small light on the endless beach for an hour, realising that he was getting no closer, nor farther away. His mind raced as he searched for an explaination for the events preceding. Finally, exausted by his trek across the beach, Y'ato sat down in the sand, crossing his legs, and looked around him.

Realizing that the beach was not a pleasant habitat for him, Y?ato started up and walked off of the sand, moving further into the jungle-like terrain that covered this mass of a land. Finally, he sat down on a ledge that overlooked his new home.

The sun had gone down and the moonlight had filled up the sky. Occasionally the smooth black clouds covered the moon, creating a pitch-black darkness that covered the foresty, grassy terrain below. It was a normal landscape, full of greens, but now as the sun had shrunken, and the moon had emerged, they appeared dark, black to the eye. Small lakes and ponds were scattered around this area like droplets of water falling off a string that was pulled out of a puddle.

From this darkness, a few dim lights could be seen.  They were very dim, almost as if someone was hiding.  Through this dim light a building could be made out, but not the very building itself, just the presence of it, as the light brought out large dark forms of what appeared to be buildings.

Y'ato laid his head down, creating a pillow for his head out of his jacket and a smooth rock. Soon, he was asleep at last.

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have fun habboi

I want in

Now thats what I call BrattyLore

lol - going great. i just re-read my passage and noticed that i continually switched between past and present tense.. whoopsie

tsokay Hunta, I walkn' dat way 2

Where is that 16 year old manchild??
Someone tell Habboi he has been called upon.

Y'ato woke up the next morning to find that the darkened buildings were a lot clearer to see. His curiosity made him walk closer towards the mysterious buildings. On his way he saw an injured koala lying helplessly on the sandy floor. He decided to help the poo creature but little did he know that it was a dead koala set as a trap to capture trangers who were not meant to be there. Suddenly strange figures came from amidst the trees and a rope grabbed his legs and pulled him up...

He overheard foreign voices "Ohh ba goo bahhh" said one of the shadows. He could not understand a single word but remembered the noises of the wolf that chased him and noticed strange markings on the walls of the village he had been taken to. He could barely see because a bag was put over his head but there was a tiny glimmer of light coming from a hole for which he could see people dressed in animal costumes. The costumes were not just random animals but they were all in wolf costumes!

Y'ato panicked as he remembered the fear he experienced when he was chased by the wolf figure. Suddenly the bag was removed and he could see that he was in a village with any buildings...

A strange man in a costume that looked more important than the other villagers approached him and said...

To Be Continued: Take it over IEMC

Uhh damn, didn't know I had mistakes but I think you know what I mean...

Hm... You didn't put a chapter title.

Its times like this I wish I was a moderator

Oh crap well I just started reading these things and kind of wrote to my hearts content plus maths called me!

Chapter 5 - Holy sh*t

... "We have chosen you." Y'ato sits there, very confused. The strange man speaks again: "We have chosen you, to lead us to the new world." Y'ato is now boggled is to what is going on. He tries to talk, but cannot. He reached up to feel his mouth, it seemed to be still there, but he could just not talk. As he was reaching up, the strange man reaached into a pouch. He pulled out a strange stick. Y'ato thought it looked like the shape of a banana, excpet with something sticking out the side of it. The man then gave Y'ato the strange stick, he didnt know what to do with it. Y'ato would've asked, but he remebered that he couldnt talk. The man then points to Y'ato's mouth. Y'ato tries to talk but alls he hears is moaning.

Suddenely, the strange man looks at Y'ato frighteningly, as if he saw something hororific. The man then yells something to a group of rather large men, and they tackle Y'ato to the ground. They club him over the head and he passes out.

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On to you, Mr. ministeve.

oh... the suspense is too much for me!!!!

/me Jumps out a window screaming

I do believe mr. Steve has forsaken us, perhaps it is time for another to step forward into the light?

...Hehe..

Mephs takes up the olympic flame.....

nah, fook it, play away, throws to Andy for the craic....

Good, He checks every forum on every site! (Or so he told me )

Yah, im giving it to Andy

OH COME ON

Don't you guy's do level design anymore?
Pointless.

Pass stuff like this to me or post it in the shout box and I will not close it... I will delete it.

Andy, whats the matter with this!? There fun.

Well, IEMC, choose another person.

Ummm.... Unbreakable, you go...

I do have to contemplate Andy's post, there ;P

What's it with the fascination with story-thread-things?

They're getting old. Urb's is good.

Andy, I promise, I'm going to map o'er the summer ;).

Chapter 6 = What a day

Y'ato opened his eyes, although he could not see anything. His head throbbed with pain where he had been hit. Y'ato still could not speak, but that was the least of his worries. He was in a dark cave, in the middle was a pile of logs, set alight. Suddenly, he heard this weird noise, impossible to describe. It grew louder...Louder...
Over to you ZombieLoffe

JUst thought that this was going nowhere, so I continued it

um.... right, it was going somewhere--> look above 3 post above from yours..

Chapter 7 = 'The Oskillian'

LOUDER, grew the now echoing mumble. Shaken by the events of his past, Y'ato lied there breathless, awaiting what it is that lingers in the dark. Then it stopped. Not a wisper could be heard, not a shuffle across the ground, whatever it was, it had stopped. All at once a bright light shown, blinding me once again. a sharp pain shot through his neck. He reached his hands to the back of his head, only to find what felt like stitches closing a wound. With his eyes clenched tightly closed, keeping the light out, his head throttled worse than ever. He curled into a prone position, hands tightly around his head, and yelled, "What is it that you want?" But noone answered. Still, nothing was heard. He rose up. Again sitting, with his eyes shut, afraid to open them, but fear was already partaken, and curiousity set in, He slowly opened his eyes, and to his surprising, he had been moved. He was no longer in a cave, but in an empty, white room, noticing this, he relized that he was messing with a far more greater power then his own.. Then the door opened. And beyond the threshold, was a long narrow hallway. Head still aching he rose to his feet, and made his way through the hallway. Once he reached the end of the hallway, he came to another large door, with no handles. The door opened, and he heard a voice, saying "Come in. Have a seat". The voice seemed rather familiar, only he could not place it from anywhere. Y'ato stepped in, and took a seat, and waited. In the corner of the room, he saw another person.. only it was dead. It's yellow hair, long, loose, and bloody. Then at the sound of another door opening, Y'ato jumped, and rose quickly, facing his captor. He was an older man, in his late 30's, with his dark grey eyebrows pointing in an angry manner. His voice quavered like a birds voice when he spoke, only Y'ato could understand it. "My name is Nemmerle, I am an Oskillian, in need of your help."

On to you ZombieLoffe. ,:D

oops, blinding HIM, ...argh.

more than three posts, more like 12 posts since the last chapter

I think ZombieLoffe has not seen this yet?

ZOMBIE!

Maybe he just doesn't care?

Seventh? How about you

So what is your style of writing?

Crime, sci-fi, that kinda stuff.

Still you could make it so he goes through a door into space

lol

lol

Well, enough with the chit chat...
lets make a loop:
Hunter, It's your turn.

Is this for the 1337 mapper dudes only? Or can anyone join?

Nah, you just have to wait till someone says your name, but obviously you have to be a known member, otherwise people won't know to say your name will they?

Just don't say my name!!

righto...

Chapter 8 - 'Help'

Nemmerle and Y'ato stared at one and other for a long while, neither one daring to speak in case their owrds offended the other. Y'ato presumed that Nemmerle was the only chance he would have at going back to his old life again... Before the morphing genes were ever placed in his blood.
"It would appear that neither of us have a choice" Y'ato murmered cautiously.
"Indeed it would. Will you please follow me?" Nemmerle replied far too quickly for Y'ato's liking.
He eyed the body in the corner of the room and as if sensing his thoughts of doubt, Nemmerle spoke, "You must understand that i killed him in self-defense. Like you, he is a morpher, but unlike you, he chose to join Seltor's gang of thugs."
It was reasurance enough, Y'ato hated Seltor with a burning passion. He had killed Y'ato's best friend in front of his eyes and had simply laughed.

"Very well." Y'ato held back the urge to weep at the thought of his friend's death, "I shall follow you."

And he did, through and endless, blinding white corridor until finally, they came to what looked like an ordinary CI scanner... Something to scan very large images onto a computer.
However, when Nemmerle opened the lid, a deep dark staircase greeted them.

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Take it away, G-Kid

Oh, the suspense

This is going good.. this is far more better than the other story threads.

Unexpected Change
'Careful' Said Nemmerle, 'The steps are pretty slippery and unstable'.
'Where...do they lead though?' Y'ato asked hesitantly.
He seemed not to hear his question.
Nemmerle stepped into the darkness, and motioning Y'ato to follow. Y'ato thought about it, then did as he was asked.
They descended the stairs until it was too dark to see. Nemmerle pulled an item out of his pocket, he hit it on the wall making a cracking sound, then it illuminated the narrow staircase in a faint green.
After walking for what seemed like ages, they saw a dim light at the end of the stair case.
'We are almost there' Nemmerle announced.
When they came out into the light, Y'ato blinked as his eyes adjusted to the chance in light.
'Oh..Jesus..' Nemmerle muttered under his breath, barely believing what he was seeing.

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Vallian88

aw, being nice to the un-heard-of members!

It would be cool to make this into a mod later.. don't ya think.. it would be the official TWHL Story Mod..

aw, being nice to the un-heard-of members!

The 'un-heard' member has been here longer than you.