Another comic.... Created 18 years ago2005-12-16 16:00:04 UTC by pepper pepper

Created 18 years ago2005-12-16 16:00:04 UTC by pepper pepper

Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 16:00:04 UTC Post #152669
Yeah yeah, i know.
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Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 16:03:19 UTC Post #152670
pretty blatant 'get the message' rip, really... speech bubbles were square... concrete bullet decal on a window... posing is ok, i guess but facial expressions aren't great... not the best.
Archie ArchieGoodbye Moonmen
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 16:24:05 UTC Post #152672
It's alright.

Horrendous filesize. I'm a quality whore, and I think 2MiB is too big for one image.
Seventh-Monkey Seventh-MonkeyPretty nifty
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 16:30:59 UTC Post #152675
tis not that bad. I agree that the facial expressions are a little off, but the purpose of the comic is laughable. It is a little confusing at the garage part, but you eventually figure it out when the guy is shot. I'd say 7/10. Woulda been 10/10 if the face posing, and the text bubbles looked better.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 16:59:25 UTC Post #152683
Thanks, i agree on that. I'm not that good with it yet. First time i tryed making something like this.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 18:10:13 UTC Post #152692
I dunno, I didn't really liked it.

6 out of 10, good luck in further comic making eh! :glad:
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 18:20:10 UTC Post #152694
booooooooriiing
Luke LukeLuke
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 18:20:32 UTC Post #152695
You stretched the images, makes it kind of look wierd.

Try and make a more origional story or setting.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 18:36:13 UTC Post #152697
Good posing, and a decent story... the layout of the comic pictures themself is pretty bad though, make it more structured.

Also, 2mb? Craps. If using Photoshop:
file -> Save for web -> JPG -> Quality: 60.
Do it now.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 19:04:59 UTC Post #152700
Um, bl. I didnt stretch a single image, it called cutting and cropping.

Thanks zl, will do.
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Posted 18 years ago2005-12-16 22:16:55 UTC Post #152721
Just that the Second Breen Photo, and the first Civilian Photo look streched... Not sure why no one else can see that...

Maybe you took the picture at an odd camera angle...

[EDIT]

Also, look at the second Breen Photo...

Whats he grabbing?
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-17 06:40:06 UTC Post #152753
Ahahahaha!

But this begs the question BL, why where you looking there in the first place? ;)
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-17 06:59:43 UTC Post #152763
He's gangsta, yo.
Seventh-Monkey Seventh-MonkeyPretty nifty
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-17 07:38:03 UTC Post #152774
he he... breen's stroking the dog!
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-17 07:48:40 UTC Post #152775
About time someone noticed :) .
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