Created 18 years ago2005-12-09 23:02:14 UTC by Archie
I was actually thinking, after reading issue 15, "wouldnt it be awesome if GMan saved the day?" It's like you've got ESPhehehehehe.
Posing in panel 3 looks weird and you could have pulled off the gag a bit better. Other then that its pretty good
Pretty short, although the quality is obiviously increasing with every issue.
Its a nice comic. Good work, i agree with Daubster about the improving quality and all.
Good posing, though he could have a teency bit more expression.What I'd say if they hadn't already said it thus taking my line of speech so meh.
That and the gag sucked...
NOTES:To be honest, the last 2 comics have just been continuing the story.. It's surprisingly difficult to put something funny in-between a reasonably serious plot.. for me anyway
I really think i used too much JPEG compression here, but the image size was dangerously large at 90% quality, so i took it down to 70%.
Next time i think i'll sacrifice file size for image quality.
Oh, and i figured the stair gag was just so goood that it had to make a re-appearance
Why are some of the speech bubbles coloured red, blue and yellow in the beginning?Different people talking, take a closer look