Suburb:47 Created 17 years ago2007-08-10 19:06:57 UTC by Tosse

New comic! I have a few episodes planned out. And here is the first one!

Enjoy!

Kinda sureal. At first I was expecting a HL2 comic Should be longer. At least I hope the future comics are. Not bad. Font on top looks a little shitty.

yeah, the title could be worked on, but seriously, this is a refreshingly new style of comic for TWHLers, and i hope it continues.

Anyone willing to make a comic with pictures of themselves = awesome

stay in one tense other than that, good work

Episode 2 is already here!

it's getting a little difficult to follow, from the dialogue's perspective.

Still awesomely made, though

And I big lol to me not noticing a typo. Gonna see if I can't fix that...

Well what do you know, it went fine!

Suddelny ftw

If the fish is a metaphor/codename it's OK. If the dude's searching for fish... Surreal.

The connection between frames 1 and 2 in ep.2 could've been cleaner, though overall - very nice.
It's definitely something original and never-seen-before here. Keep it up!

Btw, what happened to maggot-man?

Maggotman is on ice, you need a very special mood for that one!

But I'll keep this one coming. And yes, there was another typo in the second part, but I'll just leave that for the moment.

Also, if you feel like you wanna be a part of this. Just send me some pictures of you and I'll see what I can do! Im running a little low on characters!

Just post requests of views and expressions and I'll send some pics

Ditto, this looks pretty Sweet tosse

Awesome, Im glad you all like it! That means that I should keep on going!

This style of drawing allows me to mess around a lot with the poses, so it's not THAT important, the same goes with clothing. But I perfer that you wear suits or coats. Use hat's if you want to! Think gangster!

The poses needed:
Standing holding a gun
Standing without a gun
Pulling out a gun
Walking
Aiming a gun (any angle is acceptable)
Sitting behind a desk
And close ups on face (just make som expressions)

So if anybody would like to try it, do it! And the posing ain't really that important, I can model the story and the events by the photos!

I'll work some out tosse.
Gonna need to get a toy handgun though.
Ill just get a capgun and spraypaint it black or silver.

Thanks Tetsuo! The color of the gun doesn't matter! I can change that around myself. Just ask some kid if you can borrow one!

WOA!

More!

Awesome. SO how do you make these

Some pictures, a couple of filters, some rather hard work with the brushes, colour editing and then I just add the text!

brutal fags ftw.

Art style is win, dialogue and font are fail.

Nah, the art is win, so is the dialogue and font!

This was originaly concept art for my latest script, and the font is a huge part of it. But then I decided to just make something rather stupid but genious about it. And so I did! Episode 5 will be coming soon!

oh hai guise, i love my work and whatever you say about it is wrong!!! in fact, i think i'm a genius!!!! also i'm a fag.

Gtfo, Tosse. That was, hands down, the most arrogant shit I've ever read on this forum, which is quite an achievement considering the likes of Rimrook and Kasperg hang around here.

Way to take it too seriously :

Hurry up with episode 5. Also have you planned these or are you just making it up as you go?

Rofl, calm down little fellow! It wasn't arrogant, it was confident. There is a huge difference in the two of them. And yes, I do like my work, I find it quite awesome and Im very satisfied with it. And people have help me with it aswell, like sending me pictures and stuff, so I can't take all the credit and that's why Im not afraid to call it genius.

So if you're not proud of your work, why would you share it?
I am proud and I am sharing. Maybe you're just reading it wrong, or maybe you just don't have the type of humour to enjoy my work?
...and yes, the font is a perfect fit according to me, and some other people. but maybe you have a different taste, but that doesn't make the font and dialogue fail.

Flaming is not an opinion, it's ignorance. So if you got a problem with my view on my own work, that's your problem, and Im not going to listen to you. If you had expressed your opinion I'd listen to you, but when you say that it's 'fail' as a fact, no dude, you gtfo and I'll stay.

Stay tuned for Episode 5!

@Habboi: It's 50/50, I have a plan, but the photos that people are letting me use doesn't always allow me to follow the plan. And the text is always made up as I go to keep that stupidness to it!

"Confidence is ignorance. If you're feeling cocky, it's because there's something you don't know."

Dude, Im not cocky, Im just proud of my work! Drop it and move on, this thread is about the comic!

By the way, I forgot the photos that are needed for Episode 5 at my stationary computer over at my other house, so Episode 5 will be just be a fill, and the planned Episode 5 will be Episode 6.

That was, hands down, the most arrogant shit I've ever read on this forum, which is quite an achievement considering the likes of Rimrook and Kasperg hang around here.

You often confuse your lack of communication, criticism and input skills with arrogance on the part of others. This can sometimes make you look jelous and childish, instead of someone who is trying to help and putting his knowledge and technique (which you've certainly proved you have) at the service of others.

The plot is weird so far, but the typewriter font is OK.

what i'm trying to say is: everyone stfu before i delete all those posts.

btw, confidence = feeling cocky. extra points for anyone who know what book the quote is from!

Tosse, I'm beginning to believe your username should have an 'r' on the end... why? Because you're a tosser.

Kasperg, I am willing to accept that my 'criticism' wasn't OVERLY constructive - that is to say, I didn't suggest a solution to the problems I pointed out - but I still gave him my opinion. You cannot simply disregard someone elses opinion and call your own genius without coming across as an arrogant prick.

Also, Habboi, shut the fuck up.

Thank you.

Enough.

Hrmm, i'm not a fan of your comics myself, Tosse. The art style is nice enough, far from perfect - but it's there. And I actually agree with Trapt about the dialogue/font, I never found Maggot Man (that it?) funny, and I don't find this funny, but that's just me. A nicer font would give it a big boost, imo.

I'm not even going to say anything about the arrogance issue. Enough banter, other people enjoy it and who are we to rain on your parade?

Awesome Strider! Then you might like the following episodes better, Im using a different font for every character, the typewriter font is however most suited for the character 'Whitey', you know in movie when someone is typing a letter anf you can here them think what they're typing, in a deep voice. Thats the goal! But if you don't enjoy my type of humour then I wont expect you to enjoy the following episodes, new font or not. But thanks for the comment!

anyway, moderators, feel free to delete all the messy posts that aren't really related to the comic, that includes my posts regarding other subjects.

And, I need more characters, so if you wanna be a part of it, it's time to give me some photos!

Credit:
Me as Whitey
Emelie as the strange lady
Kim as the brutal fag (coming in Episode 6)
Daubster as dauby (Episode 6)

Tosse, i think you should make like a freewebs site just to keep these organized.
But still post them here

just an idea

You know what? That's a pretty awesome idea!
I'll see what I can do! i just gotta brush up on me webbdesigning skills and then I'll get right to it!

emo

Tosse, you can just download a free template it and edit it with basic HTML
its like my site. freewebs.com/tetsuosmaps

Thanks!

Here are some new episodes for you!
Credit to Tetsu0 and Hunter for pictures!

And a small game for you, guess wich picture Hunter is on!

I don't know whether to laugh or--

Actually no, that'd definitely be the correct course of action...

With better dialogue this could be pretty wicked...

As it is right now, it's more like Sin City written by Manatees!

I was expecting like Hunter in the Pure Pwnage pose XD
Is he in the first one? Blurred out in grey?

Pretty good ep.

:< i sure hope i'm going to make a reappearance, rather than just pretending to be you in one panel

Awesome as per, though.

lol, you'll be in it more! I just had to do that, I didn't have a nice picture of me doing something like that...

No worries.

Oh so it's the second one? The face is a little bigger. Not fatter

he put his face on my body.

Temorary website is up and running:
http://www.freewebs.com/suburb47/

this doesnt make any sense. :/

Motel owners wielding tippmans, huh? This is pretty cool!

HAHAAH i look so silly when getting shot.
Tosse that's pretty sweet