Checkout cs_depository Created 19 years ago2005-03-02 13:00:38 UTC by tragic

My first CS Source map so any comments or suggestions to make it better would be a great help.

http://twhl.co.za/mapvault_map.php?id=2755

or

www.freewebs.com/tragicmapper

Comment'd.

If you put some bigger/more screenies up I can look at those

Screenies

http://www.freewebs.com/tragicmapper/cssourcemaps.htm

or

Download it. It takes a while but its worth it (I think its the freewebs server.)

http://www.freewebs.com/tragicmapper/cssourcemaps.htm
http://twhl.co.za/mapvault_map.php?id=2755

I think this map is finished now, I have tested it with bots and it works better than I thought it would.

If there are any more suggestions for improvments I will add them to the map (within reason. still new to mapping)

How'd you do that radar naming :o!? I can't figure it out :F

Downloadin' now.

http://www.editlife.net/tutorials.php?id=33

thats where I figured it out from if you get stuck just ask me.

Awesome, thanks

Still downloading :F - Freebwebs is awful slow :<

Looks quite good

For a first map it's pretty nice. But if it's just your first Source map then it's a different story.

I think the choice of textures "inside" was a bad one. The bank looks incredibly old and abandoned, yet they have new PC's on teh tellers desks.

The buildings at CT spawn look very blocky, and you've merely placed props to make it seem, detailed.

Some of the doors look like they need to be re-adjusted in terms of proportion,very high and too thin.

I'd add more detail to the rooms and re-texture a few areas.

Nice start.

abandoned

I would abandon that place pretty quick if there was a big shootout :

Its my 1st css map and thrid one in total.
I have done another two for HL2DM but Ive forgotten about the first one cause it sucked.

PaLO is back!

Hi Steve <3

Jahzel:

Would you also take the furniture, and the paint from the walls?

tragic:

I see, well then your map isn't bad at all. But I'd start on the next map soon, and get as many real life reference photos as you can.

Updated and looking better.

Screenies

http://www.freewebs.com/tragicmapper/cssourcemaps.htm

Download

http://www.freewebs.com/tragicmapper/cs_depository.zip

I relise the buildings outside are blocky but hey, there buildings. Most of the other things mentioned here have been addressed so I thank you all for your suggestions.

Tragic

Not all that sure about the greeny-yellow light at the T spawn. I might give this a spin tonight.

Tspawn looks much nicer. I agree, though, that light color is too yellow.

And WB, PaLO