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Your map dosn't suck. It's really good for a first map, but there are a few things you could do better. In the hallways make light fixtures so it looks like light is coming from somewhere. It runs kind of slow. Look for my rspeeds example map soon.

This looks good for a first map. Things are placed correctly. Now that you have the basics down, there are details that you will need to learn. As Vox mentioned above, the lighting and the r_speeds are something you could focus on learning next. Andy has a good tutorial on R_speeds here at TWHL. Keep mapping, your next project will be even better.

thanks guys

Ive updated it so it should run a little smoother and i polished off some stuff.

just a few pointers UberBender. Never allow the player to get weapons before getting the HEV suit. Second make the place look as thought it was not built for simply killing aliens and third place the Enemies sparingly and in more suitable positions. Aside from that you know what you are doing, so keep practising!

:/ I dont know whats wrong with my hl but it said that it couldnt find fonts.wad when i tried to play it