My Build A Machine compo entry. I got some positive feedback from people on my site, so I decided to post it here. No gameplay, just a map where you walk around and look at an old, abandoned machine. It's a bit dark but oh well. Please comment and visit my new site, www.traptsmapping.tk
+Nice architecture.
+Cool broken glass.
+-Good machine, but as gargantua said, it has no purpose.
-Too dark.
I give it a 4/5.
They are available when the results are out.
Anyway the screenshot looks auspicious, I'm downloading it right now.
I don't want to sound stuck up or anything, but I put a lot of effort into this map, and I really think it deserves more than two stars. And the fact that it has been rated 9 times with only 4 comments is just annoying. This site needs to be like Snarkpit, where you can only rate if you comment in my opinion.
Looks good, the machine looks indeed as if it belongs there and has a purpose, probably some tin-can packaging or such. The athmosphere could've been a bit stronger with some more sounds, and those spark sounds get a bit annoying. However, the map looks decent, I like how you used the space, it's all pretty close on each other and nicely connected. The darnkness in the map however makes the detail hard to see, so a bit more (subtle) lighting would've done your map much good.
Heh, and I like that comment in your readme... Thanks!
- So so dark.
*t@[JEDI]@t* one.
But its a great map, but the elevator/lift is teh UGLI!