de_pyramid

Not bad.

To me, though, things seemed pretty square and undetailed. Things like windows and doors had no frames, and there was loads of open space and huge walls. I'd suggest one thing, and that's trims. Everywhere. Since this style of architecutre is usually square by nature, trim textures add to things immensely. Also, scale up your wall and pyramid texes so they don't look too repetitive at long distances, like in the screenie. Maybe do some VM in the ground. I like the concept so far, but in my opinion, it needs lots more detail.

Oh, you should set a sky in map properties as well so it fits the lighting better, it started me off with 'desert' and it didn't look right with the lights at all.

K. This map contains tons of obvious flaws that I'm not going to mention--since I think your past them now.

I do like the concept and you did have some nice detail bits --fish, sarcophacus, neat lighting, but that was about it. The point is you need TONS more detail for this thing.

-you didn't include your custom gfx--sky--files A shame cause it looks cool from the screenie
-There is no ct spawn--info player starts

A very neat concept that is very under-developed

2 Stars