Pre-disaster labs

You need to provide the wads!

Well through the screeni it looks boxy.(needs more artitecture) That wall with the diffrent texture doesn't fit in there, no detail, you used texture lights and a bit of texture aglinment!

which wads do you need for it sorry, and the other texture is a subway tunnel

i took gerbil out i think thats the only one you wouldent have

should work now

Played it and I must say it's pretty sucky suck..

- The texturing was in some places awfull and repeating.
- The brushwork was all the same.
- The traintrail should be electric.
- The deadends should have a door
- It was empty
- The scientist were typing in nothing

yes very true its still at early stages though the old version had the scientist typing at somthing but it look very sucky

ok i had the old one uploaded but ill change that after i compile

Ok, here I go again.

You added electric damage to the traintrail, I think it should be 20 instead of 5.

Maybe you should a train also, to make the start look more interesting.

Now I did saw scientist but they were just standing, facing nothing, here : http://img330.imageshack.us/img330/9218/lab00083cj.png

The scientist were still typing in nothing, they still didn't say anything and the texturing is still messed up. Also, you got still dead ends, you should make a door or so that doesn't go open, in that dark room poeple probaly use there flashlight because they wonder whats there, what will they found, just a dead wall.

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/8356/naamloos12312339fx.png

So my general advice would be add some detail and add some ambience!

Also for Forge, I never said I could do it any better and I'm just pointing out what he needs to improve, even if it sounds harsh.

So ansith, good luck!

PS : I know it's still a w.i.p. so maybe you was about to put doors at dead ends and all that..

shit really the scripting still isent working this is crap i had it all working they should be walking around pondering at stuff

and yea ill fix the dark room (its going to be for lockers and the empty one with the door will be the hev suit room) and the dead ends

but this scripting is really pissing me off

Learn from your mistakes, the map isn't that bad. Just boring.

You should make some kind of inactive machine in that dark room en when you walk in it the lights turn on and it starts to work, haha.

I agree with most of the points FresheD had to say, but I know its a work in progress so they're ok for now!

Also, any brushed you have on walls, like those signs, they need to be func_walls or 1 unit away from the wall.
That will reduce r_speeds and some texture problems -> http://www.dumbarse.netfirms.com/texttear.jpg

did the scripting work fine for you?

I assume so, anything special supposed to happen apart from typing scientists and people walking around?

nope not yet its just the scripting hasent been working for people

There walking allright, there walking!

Ansith, if you haven't fixed the sitting scis (and for future reference) I suggest you read this: http://www.gamedesign.net/node/3

I think the main thing you're doing is setting the clip brush above the seat too low, since if you didn't have a clip brush the scis would be stuck in the floor. Try setting the clip brush 16 units above the seat, then positioning the sci entity's little x on that clip brush. That should work.

yea i fixed it ill put the fixed one up once i put in some more stuff so it looks good