Sky Snipe

For a first map, this is really good.. Its quite fun for an awp/scout map, but the the texturing is absolutely dreadful....

But he didn't say this was his first map, just his first cs 1.6 map.

fairly good for an early map. Okay brushwork on the little hut things on the roofs, I liked the way you could snipe the people through the windows.

It's got some slightly high r_speeds (around 1400 at max), really bad texture choices, and if I'm not mistaken, you didn't use Zoners Half-Life Tools (I suspect this from looking at the flat shadows on the boxes).

Excellent first map!

No real use in nitpicking a map such as this, because for what it its--an FY Playground--It's very nicely done!

The only criticism I'm going to put forth is to increase your "max viewable distance" under map properites.

Looks like your off to a good start in the other departments--clean brushwork, and no errors per se in anything else--though they deinitely can be improved

Thanks a lot all, these comments realyl help. this is my first map period :). i wasnt sure if a max viewable distance was a property, now i know.

i have to work on my texture choices i agree. i just got a little giddy when it was finished brush/entity wise lol