my first map Created 18 years ago2005-07-29 12:52:30 UTC by profesore

this is my first and unfinished map and i would like to know your opinion
the map is located in the "unfinished " and is named "myfirstmap"

For everyone else here is the map's link.

Im not one to download and rate maps, so sorry.

i was going to download it when i suddenly realised it was for CS. And the screenie looked worthwhile

tnks a lot Luke!

Wow! I like the screeny.. Nice done.. But I will not download be cause it is for CS.. I don't play CS anymore.. >_<

Right, here goes.

0.

Nice floor texture. The trim is nice. The walls and ceiling are terrible.

1.

Pointless dark corridor. Nice staircase; good banisters.

2.

Terrible face splitting there, making the lighting jagged. The best thing to do in this instance would probably be to move that wall a tiny bit away from the staircase. Alternatively, you could tie the entire staircase to a func_wall, but that might be a bad idea with such a large piece of architecture.

3.

Ceiling's a let-down again here. The walls lack any detail.

4.

Much better. Feels a lot like a car park under here. Better ceiling, too.

5.

Weird lighting on the strange box thing around the map. I'd suggest you use sky instead. Look at the Environment tutorial. That building with the glass is rather nice, but the bushes are a bit square.

6.

Nice, but you can fall off the edge of the map!

7.

The textures on the bottom of that look nasty. Rotate them using Texture Application mode. If you don't know how, read the tutorial on it.

8.

My favourite bit.

And I don't have CS

thats a good look on the last one, i really like that. I quite like the police cars too

DUde, if your not gonna review it or you dont have CS dont make a post at all.

I only made a post so its easier for people to get to it.

Tell me did you use onslaght's prefab for those cars?

i was about to say, those cars are definately prefabs.

That last screenshot looks good, the others look crap.

From the looks of it things seem to be pretty nice in this map. I'd like to check that out sometime

Well I tested this map out finally and I must say its not all that bad. Whats with the sky? its like brick.

Also if it were bigger, that would be better too.

the shadow in pic1 looks like 3dsmax shadowmap...

good job