ThE MaTriX : SouRcE!!11!!1!one!1 Created 19 years ago2005-11-30 16:30:17 UTC by Archie

FeeSt ur eYes on teh bst hlcomic evr made cz its 1337!111!11!!

stay tuned for ISSUE #2

hahaha, lol, possesed computer

Edit: Just though i'd point out that the text is rather small.

yep, silly me! i edited the larger screenshots and then made them smaller so the text was reduced a lot. whoops!

Pretty good, the positioning is ok in some places, you need to set your jpg quality to 100 though and as he pointed out make the text bigger, try to use real bubbles also, even if it means using Microsoft Word pre-made ones...

Also whats with the fire on the first window?

Confusing.

lol thats funny and true. First when I saw this topic beside the name of the forum I was sure Neo_the_one posted it.

[quote]Wake up Neo, The Matrix pwns you...[/quote

LOLOL!

Confusing, yes.
Crappy poses, yes.
Creative, Yes.

Ill give it a 7 outta 10.

Also the mapping is quite horrible. Al list make a source for that light and instead of such a big ugly, blocky room try a blocky corridor with many doors, the blockiness wont be felt as much as in this one. :

its a gmod map.... its meant to be square and empty

Heh.. Not bad
Lookin forward ta issue #2

I know but still it's really easy to make those things I said! So why wont you do those things, it will make it look better.

Lol, teh pwnage hunter, keep it up!

Yeah Hunter, he has a point, make a more detailed room, it doesn't matter if it lags because your taking still images...
Use proper speech bubbles and work on your posing: I give it 7/10 also because the posing isn't the best, needs more in depth walls and clipped walls. Yeah and that light really needs a source!

Also just because your using Gmod doesn't mean it is meant to be blocky, take for example your favourite HLcomic site, they use detailed maps, it makes the scene so much more real, so my suggestion is work on a map now with all the scenes you'll need and bump up those graphics to full, not medium...

Goodluck

HAHHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHH I'm not kidding that f&cking funny!

pretty good... funny bed only bad thing was neo's actions/poses were zombie like

thats pretty funny.

and for JPGs, I normally give it a 15% compression and use optimize, no distinguishable quality loss and it can get to as low as 20% of the original file size. but I thats with an $800 program, so I don't know if what you have has some of the same features

Pngs work almost just as good as jpegs without the blurr, why not just use a png?

what the hell...? is this seriously funny?

Lame and sucky. And I'm not only saying that 'cos I don't like you.

that was funny.. i thought the posing was bad because neo was drunk or something lol

good job!

If habboi made that with you why is he critisizing it?

Lame and sucky. And I'm not only saying that 'cos I don't like you.

you dont like me?

If habboi made that with you why is he critisizing it?

emm.. my only answer to this would be.. Its habboi.. all he did, though was furnish the desk.. and break a few things.. and spray bullet holes and explosion decals everywhere. and lag the place terribly because of whatever the hell he was doing outside the appartment but hey... its habboi.

i thought the posing was bad because neo was drunk or something

partially true.. but for the most part it was just bad posing.. but its not REALLY bad, is it? the only one i really hate is the one where he was shooting the gun..

Heh, I found it funny.

Meh, boring. Horrible mapping. Crappy text size and colouring.

Also, use, if you've got Adobe PS, use the Save for web feature. It really compresses the file without loosing much quality (I usually use 60, which is hardly distinguishable from 100.)

I giggled at the @ "die computer deamons" part....

Oi Hunter go on msn now, i'll show you how a real comic is made, after all these guys loved my disgusting comic

I know it's a joke but posing is really bad.
To help with your posing, type "phys_timescale 0.1" and you can hold down "e" while you pose and everything is much easier to pose.

Posing 1/3 - Needs lots of work. Butts dont stick out that much...
Editing 1/3 - Not very good
Story/humor 1.5/3 - I didn't laugh
Bonus 0/1 - Nope, sos

Overall 3.5/10 - Bad, needs work.

it has a lack of source-ness

I just wish he showed me it before posting, I would have said it needs a lot of work, even my nasty comic is better no offence