Want to be freaked? Created 19 years ago2004-10-11 00:17:18 UTC by davideo59

OK, I was talking to this friend on AIM and he gave me this link

http://www.holyshiite.com/caver/

Read that - its a biggie so it might take a while (took me about 1:30 without breaks, and no im not in any special classes). I believe that the story is real because they have pictures of most of it. Even if its not true, its a good piece of literature that will keep you to keep reading it.

Hmm, interesting.

Not horribly freaky IMO, but it's an interesting read.

Is it night time there? You need to read the whole thing, because alot of the previous (boring to some) stuff really add's some atmosphere.

BTW, it only took you 30 minutes to read that whole thing?

I'm a fast reader.

And yeah, it's night. I suppose it'd be creepy if I was there in that situation. From the comfort of my computer though, it's not as scary.

You really have to read it [bold] ALL [/bold] to get the full feeling for it. Maybe just my clostrophobia thinking about crawling in the small hole... Did you see those pictures!?

I did. Pretty tight squeeze in there .

not freaky come off it its alright to say u were afraid!! for them peeps. always frontin sheesh

the post before was mine forgot to sign in

It's not freaky IMO. It's interesting, however.

I just read the second post of mine and thought i might of been a bit blunt with it. Hope i didnt offend u rabid that was just a wee bit harsh
alll i was tryin to do was get some controversy discussusion started on this topic

No offense taken.

That story was great. I did find it scary. I have been in a cave that has not been explored before and its scary enough without that weird shit happening. I think parts of the story are true about the hole and stuff. He just had to add a couple things to make it freaky.

While I was reading this somone came up behind me and said my name; I jumped out of my skin.

Anyone who potholes needs lockin' up.

Anyone who bothers reading through that much text obviously doesn't map enough.

Something tells me Zombie here can't read - Now that it is daytime I don't believe it actually happened, but ovbiously I believe that it actually existed because of the pictures. "A smell of death was in the air" - what did this thing find to kill in an completely abandoned cave? It probably just let one loose...

Humm, that would explain the rumbling too.

Wow, very interesting story. I hate to think about the demon they may have unleashed upon us.

Ohnoes.

Meh. The cave part was true, about making the hole. What was through the whole however, was complete and utter bullshit.

Notice how each little bit of proof he had didn't end out coming up right? The photos of the heiroglyph? The video?

Whilst he had pictures of the round rock, who says that the round rock was past the Tomb? What would we know?

Put plain and simple, This man is a writer. It is quite easily noticed.

Which, was the makings for a good story. But your right I'd say chances, this happening for real? Next to none! I'd have to be there to believe it. But seeing as being, that would'nt be the smartest place to put myself. I guess this one will be left in the unsolved mysteries storage locker forever.........
And what if, all they were smelling was the worst fluff ever? Poor schmucks(schmuck left over piece of forskin from circumcision ceremony)
I guess they deserve it as they didnt bring backup and a couple more guns.

what is it abnout? i dont o read im at school. It would take too long...

It's a great story, some of it is long and drawn out, and the ending was too obviously built up. but i thought it was a good read, nice find davideo

and i'm at work, so i can't map, zomb

seriously, what is it?

it's about this guy that goes caving/potholing, they find a small hiole, they feel a breeze and figure it must be more than just a dead end tunnel, the ygo down, start digging at this tiny hole in teh wall, it gets bigegr, but they start hearing noises from deep within, liek a rumbling, and sometimes teh wind woudl stop blowing., and teh sound of a rock scraping, liek it was being.. moved

they dig for weeks on end (obviously with breaks, they dont spend 3 weeks down a cave), and one occasion, the main guy is digging (there's only two guys down tehre digging) and he hears a scream, a chilling scream, teh otehr guy is liek:: must be an animal, but really... we don't know..

they decide to keep digging to break nto the cave/whatever it is behind teh hole (which is now a very small tunnel, very very small, shit-ya-pants small)

they bring their dog down, and he';s happy, exploring for a while, tehn tehy get to the hole/tunnel entrance and teh dog is scared, doesn't make a sound,hairs stand up on end. tehy continue digging.

they manage to get a big enough hoel for one guy to get through, he manages to get quite far, but has to come abck when he can't fit any further, i mean, this hole is small

http://www.edaddyo.com/images/caver/squeeze.jpg

so tehy get some more tools, come back and start digging, they manage to get furtehr, and he takes a camera and takes a few photos, on his way he goes past a round rock, thinks: tahts odd, btu not taht odd, perfectly round.

he finds a slightly laregr cave and explores a little,, but is suddenly very aware that he is being watched, just the feeling, you know

so he starts to leave, but he notices soem styrange heiroglyphics (spelling) on teh cave wall, almost Blair Witch - like.
he gets teh fuck outta tehre, and they vow to return with more people.
tehy get ion touch with Joe, he agres to go down, but tehy don't tell him about anything that has happened before.
he goes into teh tunnel first, he emerges at teh point where it widens enough to stand up, but as teh otehr guy is coming through, he hits his head and has to turn back, but Joe decides to explore a little more, he has to be back in 20 minutes, 25 minutes later he aint back, but tehy cant hear anything, after 5 minute sof shouting, the yhear noises, te yshout to joe, he reply's, they ask him if he is ok, he says: "no"

they get out, joe is pale, and queit. teh yleave teh cave, and joe says nothign all teh way hiome.

he won't return tehir calls and doesnt answer teh door to his home. he is effectively, in hiding.

the two orinigal nuttah's decide to go back to see wtf happened. tehy go back to teh cave.

the guy goes into teh cave (it's worth noting taht one guy has an injury form an old caving experience, and he;s also fat, so he cant fit into teh hole) and make shis way further tahn he's been,. but this time he takes a camera,a camcorder, and a telephone for use underground (two army phone's, bit of wire between)
he gets far down, and he explores, but in teh darkness he hears the noise of a rock being moved, he turns around and stands up too fats, he smashes his head on the cave roof, destrotying the light on hsi helmet, and giving him a nasty bump.

he sits in teh dark, waiting, listening, he gets out his maglite, but teh battery is half flat, and teh light is very dim, he can just see teh round rock, it's moved...

he tries teh phone, nothing, dead..

he gets out glowsticks and throws them about, by this time he is petrified.
he decides he has to get back, as he inches past the round rock, he notices a breeze, and taht teh rock actually rolled over the telephone wire, which is why it wasn't working.

he scrambles back down teh caves and tunnels, he reaches teh small tunnel and starts crawling as fast a he can, very aware taht he is in danger, and that he needs new underwear.

he gets far enough down to be able to hear his buddy, he shouts at hinm taht they have to leave NOW!!, as he finishes, he is overcome by an horrific smell, teh stench.. of.. death.

his buddy can smell it, and is shocked, guy in tunnel shouts taht his buddy nmust leave now, and taht he'll catch up.

he gets out of teh small tunnel , and it's almost pitch balck, he rushes to teh cave entrance (don't be fooled, tehy had to rappel to get in, so it;s a bit of a climb to get out)

his buddy is already half way up, he startsd to climb, he is already bruised,cut,fucked up from crawlign through teh tunnel as fast as he could.

teh yget to a ledge, and his buddy starts to climb up, and tehn teh guy gets on teh rope too, as he climbs, he can feel tension on the rope, something is pulling ti from inside the cave.

teh yclamber out and his buddy cust teh rope, it flies down teh hole with a loud hiss. moving at speed.

tehy get in teh truck and leave.

next few days, he spends like Joe did, hiding, and living in fear of teh shadows.

he meets up with Joe, and teh three of tehm decide to go back, the ytake all soerts of shit, guns, etc. and in teh Journal on teh website, he's liek:

we'll be back tomoorrow to tell what we found, you click on teh link page, and it;s like :
this page could not be found.

very blair witch, nice story though, pretty well told.

I almost thought, for a min. You took the cave memoirs and pasted them all on this thread . lol

haha, no of course not, I just added shitloads of spelling errors, removed any story tellign aspect, and cut out important pieces of the story =)

lol

whoa, that is creepy....

MAP IDEA!

blair witch is right...

lol

It is a really good story though, I enjoyed reading it despite how fake it was. It was preety suspensful. Guy should become an author. I am seriosuly freaking at the thought of being in something that tight... Its kind of lame how he ruined it all there at the end, people should learn that too much at one time can really lead to a fake ending. Telephone breaks, he leaves his camera back there, he hits his head, his light breaks, the rock moves by itself, he can barely move, even though he crawls the 500 ft. back awful quick...

He could move, he only bumped his head.

If you had some satanic creature chasing you, I bet you'd high-tale your ass out of any place fast.

A story like this could be adapted into a good movie.

It's obviously fake. I read it and could see all the stuff that, conveniently, wasn't there was integral to the actual story. My Analysis: He's a budding writer who based this on another trek. He obviously couldn't think of an ending which explains the '404 error' on the last page. Think about it: how could you finish this story without letting it down??

...and then I woke up.

Thats a good ending.

In a way, it is an ending. Think about it. He says on that last page something along the lines of "expect me back in a couple days with a new journal entry in here."

But.... No Journal Entry. In other words, he didn't make it back. Perhaps that was the point. Perhaps that's how he wanted it to end. Perhaps he delibrately made that hyperlink to the next page that didn't exist for a reason.

Think about it. It makes perfect sense.

omg idd, 'he couldn't think of an ending' - lol

i'm 100% that he thought of teh ending first, and tehn wrote teh story leading up to it.

it's classic writing techniques, let the readers imagination do teh work, as a human mind can scare itself more than a full description.

and uhm, teh rock didn't move by itself, whatever it was taht was pulling on teh rope/painting hyroglyphics (spelling)/and killing thengs/people down tehre, taht's what moved teh rock.

The rock also explains why teh wind wasn't blowing all the time. that rock obviously hid a passage taht led to anotehr cave, which was open somewhere, which is how teh 'creature' got teh stuff to kill, it also explains the foul smell, it kept all teh rotting corpses down tehre too.

it's actually all very obvious when you read it, but all that aside, it's a great story, and one i've seen before.

if your peacin out(dead) u aint gonna be righting the final post adds to the horror

I did read it, but it doesnt make much sense with the rumbling. I think that he commited susicide if he bought a gun and all.... if its real... which it isnt...

Perhaps exploring the cave on your own would allow you to judge whether or not its true or false.

...and then I woke up.

Thats a good ending.

That's the lamest, most cliche'd ending I've ever heard!!

"I did read it, but it doesnt make much sense with the rumbling. I think that he commited susicide if he bought a gun and all.... if its real... which it isnt..." - quote

what about the rumbling?

I think that was a reference to teh fact that it wasn't a creature they could easily identify, tehy never said it was a shaking rumbling, more a distant rumbling, a noise as opposed to a feeling.

He committed suicide?

are you joking? please tell me you're joking. why would he kill himself? where in the story does he talk about it? believe me, if you're thinking of killing yourself you try and warn people about it, a last call for help, as it were.

it's just a f**king story, he didn't kill himself, no-one died, and the "ending" was supposed to be a .. 'omg! why isn't there any more? could he have died down there?!' kind of thing.

it's just a story, he didn't kill himself, no-one died, and the "ending" was supposed to be a .. 'omg! why isn't there any more? could he have died down there?!' kind of thing.

Exactly. And thank me for cleaning up your language in that little quote PaLO.

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Wind howling was the noise, a rumbling was from "the trucks on the road outside". And if it were true (im no where near saying it is), he probably would have killed himself. I mean if you buy a gun, hear noises, sleep with the lights on, see things, you'd freak! And murder yourself!