Garden

Well, Tomato, I see some improvements.

1. Texture usage.
2. At least this has a little feeling of place. Not that much but well, more than your previous maps...

Still, I think it's unworthy a release. Very simple brushwork. The glass in the tower isn't breakable but still you've put sniper rifle's there, very strange. The roof of the tower seems to rest on the glass solely, some pillars should make it more believable. Also, check the tower, there are some holes were the glass touches the upper floor. Ugly.

Tomato, you still need to put more work in your maps. Hey, I released my first map after 2 years of mapping and a lot of people were stunned by it. Now, 6 months later, I'm about to release my next DM map, and also a small SP map (for the compo). Maybe I'm the other opposite but still, don't be so hasty with releases. Really, you can impress people much more with a good map when it's your one of the first you made than when it's your thousand-and-some'th release.

Tomaatti, you'd do fine if you just spent more time on your maps. Read a few tutorials, mess around, learn and experiment. Don't release everything!

You can shoot thougth the glass !

Ow well, right, snipers penetrate small walls. My fault.

Still, it doesn't look convincing. In real world, glass would definitely break when you tear a bullet trough it.

Then again, your next release really should look a lot better. I'm not going to be so easy next time.

from series "not another tomaatti map"

ok