That's my map! It's not best (for now) but i'm going to change maaany textures after i've get rid of few problems i can't solve. I want scripted_sentence to run correctly(scripted sequence also if something CAN actualy be done), change teleport so that its only on when the button is pressed (messed something with master) and, finnaly get those boxes at end to go up with the water, and go down when there is no water (for now 1 is ok, 1 stays in water and 1 stays in ...the air.) And besides that map "is" already playable but wait till i'm done with texturing, light improvments and the re
If you want to make a good go of this kind of map, I would recommend checking out some of Alexb911's or The Hunter's hazard maps.
Yours is way too small imo. The darkness was actually sort of interesting--Remo Williams' style.