hi_tribes_test

what wad did you use as i never seen some of the walls before

Since it's an HI map, probably the HI wadfile.

wow, funny stuff, there's other wads besides halife.wad
it's actually a combination of a Blazeer tex set and wastefacility by doenerking

Hm, what Blaz tex set? I don't recognize the texes from it.

blaz_urban_wad.wad IIRC

but there's only two or thrree balz texs there, teh rest are all w.f. and a combo of teh wad I used for cs_jungle_assault

um... wow, where to begin...

-poorly alligned textures on the vents, the "squarish" pipes, pillars and elsewhere.

-the vents are too small

-the garage door is out of proportion.

-the "trim" that goes along the stairs ends abruptly.

-the graffiti on the door by the spawn looks out of place.

-the lights at the spawn look like a 5yr old made them.

-the air conditioning unit inside the building with no vents attatched looks rediculous.

-face splitting caused by the lower stairs.

-blocky architecture throughout.

-very little detail (especially around doors and openings).

etc, etc, etc...
overall, very unimpressive... especially from someone who attacks so many other peoples works.

i expected to see half-life2 quality work coming from you judging from the way you talk about other peoples stuff... but all i see is a tiny non-proportioned plain hallway with some custom textures porly applied to it. why show us this??

anyway, theres no need to argue, defend or, make comments about my remarks... i'm just giving you constructive criticisms without resorting to personal attacks or insults.

my advice, since this looks like it took 10 minutes to make, delete it and start over... and try to keep in mind what i said above.

thnx

-poorly alligned textures on the vents, the "squarish" pipes, pillars and elsewhere.
hmm, i see where you're coming from, maybe I'll have to take another look at how I get that texture to curve around the bend, not that people look that closely, but i'll give it a try.
pipes have 6 sides, didn't want too many more faces, as you get about 500 w_poly, and I intend to add more things.
the pillars, well, i see where you're coming from with that, but i used a texture taht repeated quite obviously, so i needed to break it up, the result is a texture taht doesn't tile obviously, but is somewhat misaligned, teh plain concrete disguises it to a degree, maybe i'll change the texture on that whole part, but i doubt it.

-the vents are too small
I'd disagree, have you seen actual vents that you can crawl in, apart from the movies?

-the garage door is out of proportion.
the garage door was put there by me to block off teh entrance into teh next area, it's no longer tehre, bnor was it intended to be, like i said to sum1 else, i shld have used a more obviously 'under-construction' texture.

-the "trim" that goes along the stairs ends abruptly.
the map is in 'unfinished', that "trim" is a recessed power line, that will make it's way up to the extractor fan, and join into the mains line.

-the graffiti on the door by the spawn looks out of place.
again, this is an adjoining door, leading outside, shlda used a more obvious 'under construction' texture.

-the lights at the spawn look like a 5yr old made them.
without resorting to personal insults huh? well, i made them, and it was the first time i'd compiled them, and i thought they were nicely scaled, they broke when shot, and teh actual 'lights' were a nice effect, i need to add something to give it 'pzazz', any thoughts? or are you negative only?

-the air conditioning unit inside the building with no vents attatched looks rediculous.
no vents? how do you mean? it's 'vents' are recessed into teh wall, and teh only thing i didn't liek about that unit, was the lack of support from teh under-side, i want to build a little frame around it, to make it seem more 'real'

-face splitting caused by the lower stairs.
didn't see that, are you reffering to teh very lower set of stairs, could well be the light reflecting from the wall light in there. But i'm pretty sure it;s impossible to make a map without causing soome face splitting, you're just being picky now.

-blocky architecture throughout.
I suppose it is, but it also has a number of varying angles within the 'block'and as it's aan indoor adjoinign corridor, i figured it'd be silly to have amazing architecture in a place that so wouldn't have it.

-very little detail (especially around doors and openings).
what does that mean? you want to see little card swipes? signs? in noticable areas i have door frames, for doors taht you can't enter or use, tehre is no doorframe, it;s a little mapping trick called 'consistent, unquestionable, obvious'; meaning the player can't go wrong when finding his way, as all un-usable routes are obviously marked. as soon as i finished this, i added a door, i would show you a screenshot of it, but i don't think there's much point.

not sure if by pipes you meant the electricity lines and power board thing taht lnks to the lights.

thanks for your comments, btu maybe instead of just saying what's wrong, you could endeavour to add some suggestions too.

Thing is, I can take criticism, and I don't need anyone to stand up for me.
Better luck next time.

oh, and lol @ teh rating, you noob =P

Teehee.

sorry, i'm not going to read all the excuses you came up with for producing a poor map. we really dont need to hear your "explanations" for why you failed. instead, just accept the fact that the map is pretty bad and try to learn from the constructive criticism you have recieved.

in other words, dont get so defensive and make excuses for all the problems this map has... your time would be more wisely spent learning how to map better.

you sound like my mother.

she sounds awesome

"thanks for your comments, btu maybe instead of just saying what's wrong, you could endeavour to add some suggestions too.

Thing is, I can take criticism, and I don't need anyone to stand up for me.
Better luck next time"

uhh...

"thanks for your comments, btu maybe instead of just saying what's wrong, you could endeavour to add some suggestions too."

suggestion: "my advice, since this looks like it took 10 minutes to make, delete it and start over... and try to keep in mind what i said above."

"Thing is, I can take criticism"

lol yeah... i can see that by how much you typed to try to defend your "map" lol

"and I don't need anyone to stand up for me."

uh... so what? and who would? lol

"Better luck next time"

at what? and better luck on your next map lol...

Better luck next time at trying to piss me off, and raise some eyebrows, you're just talking shite each tiem you step up to teh mic, liek some kinda bitch.

so back away from teh mic bitch, back away.

and, uh, at , well, uhm, yeah, what , hh

talk normally retard.

lol yeah, you're not pissed: "BAN ANONYMOUS!" ha-ha-ha

now get a clue poor guy... take your meds, and go back to "thinking" you can map...

p.s. thanks for taking my advice and deleting MOST of your crap-maps from the vault... i think you have a few more to go though

What advice?

I cleaned my space up, so I wasn't hogging space that other members could use constructively...

You really do have a chip your shoulder.

I requested you be banned a long time ago.

I request it again.

If I ever find out who you are, I'll give you a big kiss and thank you for being such an entertaininglittle chap.

Grow a dick, mate.. seriously, get laid, chill out, you got issues.

"What advice? I cleaned my space up, so I wasn't hogging space that other members could use constructively... "

lol... and FINISH taking my advive and "clean up" the other 5

"You really do have a chip your shoulder."

lol... uh, yeah cause i flame so many helpless noobs like you do oh, and i see since i've called you out about it, i don't see your big dumb mouth talking so much shit to noobs anymore AHHAHHH!

"I requested you be banned"

dude, no one cares what you request... stop thinking you're anything but a bitter pissant... it's not good for you

"you got issues."

rofl... poor dumb insane guy

lol... uh, yeah cause i flame so many helpless noobs like you do oh, and i see since i've called you out about it, i don't see your big dumb mouth talking so much shit to noobs anymore AHHAHHH!

What>? This is what gets me man, first time you started talking shit at me, was after that shithead funessen flew off teh handle in a thread I hadn't posted in before.. I gave him a piece of my mind.
So, like, what.. again? moron dude, fucking moron...

lol... and FINISH taking my advive and "clean up" the other 5

k. while I'm doing mine, you wanna 'clean out' those three useless excuses for examples?

rofl... poor dumb insane guy

who takes personal offense at what someone else says about someone elses map? It's a map buddy, it'snot like I'm calling his dead motehr a rotting whore, is it? jesus, you make me laugh sometimes, well all the time.

excuses excuses... more excuses for flaming noobs...

i've provided several examples for you now, so you should have no more confusion about your behaviour. and i'm glad you realize that it wont be tolerated so you knocked it off haha.

and to answer this question: "who takes personal offense at what someone else says about someone elses map?"

i never took personal offense to what you said about other peoples maps... i just got sick of seeing the same FEW people tearing down noobs and acting all proud about it. if your going to act like you did something great, at least do something worthy of pride.

you seem to think it's your duty to ridicule and humiliate those who you think are stupid or weak. don't take ofense to me because i think it's my duty to piss on bullies.

Lol, I'm a bully am I? If your interpretation of a bully is someone who tells 'noobs' what he thinks of them, and tells 'newbs' how to solve problems, I guess I'm a bully.

You're just a bitter little 'noob' who's pissed off because I haven't given in liek all the other poor souls you've harrassed, get over it, get a life, stfu. noob.

I listen to mods, not wankers.

my interpretation of a bully is:

N. "A person who is habitually cruel or overbearing, especially to smaller or weaker people. A noisy, blustering fellow, more insolent than courageous; one who is threatening and quarrelsome; an insolent fellow"

V. "To treat in an overbearing or intimidating manner. See Synonyms at intimidate.
To behave like a bully.
To force one's way aggressively or by intimidation"

well that seems to describe you to a tee. yup, you sure are tough with the weak noobs arent you... lol.

and just remember, when i see you treat the helpless noobs the way i've seen you do in the past, i'll be there to slam my proverbial fist down your throat to knock you back into place... again. got it? good.

now keep treating the noobs as you have been since i put you in your place, and you should have no further problems with me

oh my god.

am i starting to irritate you or is it my imagination that your posts are getting longer?

you can fuck off if you think i'll let you get within a mile of me, come and try 'slamming the proverbial fist' down my throat, you talk shit, liek a fucking noob lol

get off your high horse and see how you're becoming what you say you hate.

I suggest you read Animal Farm, it may open your eyes to exactly what you have become.

slam the proverbial fist, hah, don't make me laugh you pathetic smear of shit.

i see you got nothin...

"get off your high horse and see how you're becoming what you say you hate."

i know what i am... and are you saying that I'M bullying YOU!? haha too funny... is that a whimper coming from the mighty destroyer of noobs "piece of sh*t"?

"I suggest you read Animal Farm, it may open your eyes to exactly what you have become."

lol animal farm. and i really dont care what a forum nazi thinks "i've become"

yawn... it's getting old noob...

why do you insist on fighting? you lost, fair and square, and you can't take it so you keep whinging on about this shit, you're lame dude, a real fucking lamer, I'll carry this on as long as you want to keep calling me names like nazi! and bully! I mena come boy, a bully ffs, I have an opinion, you want me to just stop being who I am (and by that I mena I have a strong opinion, I'm no fuckign bully) because some little prick on teh internet says so, if you wanna talk shit, say it to my face, cunt...

we'll see who does the bullying..

why no comment here? you said you weren't afraid?

aw... cant hang huh lol

"you lost, fair and square"

sure stupid... i lost. too bad only you and me are reading this and we both know what i've done to you

"I have an opinion, you want me to just stop being who I am (and by that I mena I have a strong opinion, I'm no fuckign bully) because some little prick on teh internet says so"

it's ok to hate yourself... but dont take it out on others... especially the weak. i'm really beginning to see how ignorant you are. you think that because you are a certain way, it's ok to treat others any way you like.

theres enough shit dumped on the world, there's no need for bitter pissants like you to run around treating others like shit because you got a raw deal. and look who you pick on too... the weakest out of the bunch... what a fucking stud you are.

get over it dude and start showing others some respect... then i wont have to bitch slap you again

Ok
All right
Oh no
This one, this one, this one

Heads of state who ride and wrangle
Who look at your face for more than one angle
Can cut you from their bloated budgets
Like sharpened knives through chicken mcnuggets

Now, heads of state who ride and wrangle
Who look at your face for more than one angle
Can cut you from their bloated budgets
Like sharpened knives through chicken mcnuggets

(Shut the fuck) up
Yo, shut the fuck up
(Shut the fuck)
Right, right, learn to buck up
(Shut the fuck)
Right, shut the fuck up, hey, ho
(Shut the fuck)
Now, now learn to buck up

(1, 2, a-1, 2, 3, 4!)

Now, nimble fingers that dance hall numbers
Will eat your children and steal your thunder
While heavy torsos that heave and hurl
Will crunch like nuts in the mouths of squirrels

Now, nimble fingers that dance hall numbers
Will eat your children and steal your thunder
While heavy torsos that heave and hurl
Will crunch like nuts in the mouths of squirrels

(Shut the fuck) up
Yo, shut the fuck up
(Shut the fuck)
Right now learn to buck up
(Shut the fuck)
Right, shut the fuck up yeah, ho! Yow!
(Shut the fuck) Yow! Yow! Yow!
Learn to buck up

Now, simple feet that flicker like fire
And burn like candles in smokey's fires
Do more to turn my joy to sadness
Than somber thoughts of burning planets

Now, clever feet that flicker like fire
And burn like candles in smokey's fires
Do more to turn my joy to sadness
Than somber thoughts of burning planets

(Shut the fuck)
All right
Ok
I don't(Shut the fuck) wanna
I don't wanna hear it that's right
(Shut the fuck)
Oh no, ok, I don't wanna
(Shut the fuck)
I don't wanna
(Shut the fuck)
Yeeaahh, ho, yow!
(Shut the fuck)
I don't wanna...I don't wanna...

Ooooh ooh oooooooh ooh ooooooohhh ooh

queer song and... u lose

lose what? sorry have I missed something?

"lose what?"

well, you started a fight with me, then i made you quit... pretty open and shut loss dude...

oh and just incase you try another one of your unfounded arguments and say i started this, take a look at funz map again and see who singled who out 1st... thats right

Anonymous, If you didn't realise, PaLO was actually taking your comments seriously, until he realised that you let your personal feelings get in the way of the way you saw his map.

There is no need to take out your anger on PaLO, just because you can't get an erect penis.

hear hear

sorry, dont want to get between you butt buddies

lol heeeelp trapt heeeeelp rofl

Anonymous, that shows an extreme level of immaturity.

"Anonymous, that shows an extreme level of immaturity."

uhh... where have you been? show me where anyone in this argument has acted maturely. this is a very immature argument so why point out one post and say its immature... sorry, doesn't make sense...

It makes perfect sense.

And I chose to get involved here because you were being an idiot, and it was un-needed. In fact, PaLO didn't ask me to help at all.

As I said, There is no need to take out your anger on PaLO, just because you can't get an erect penis. There is medication for that type of thing.

hmm... so you're doing what pal said was wrong for me to do.

and sorry, idotic childish remarks about penises, gayness, butt holes, balls, mothers, grandfathers, pigs, dogs, etc, will not get me mad... like pal found out.

and also, trapt, i never said anything to you in the past so i dont know why you're acting like i victemized you. looks like you're getting a little big for your breeches lately.

and fyi, unless you start acting overtly racist, or start repetedly bullying and flaming helpless noobs, i doubt you will be able to get me to take enough notice of you to tear you a new one too.

nice try but... cya

Is this guy some kind of negro? Probably some retard gook with one leg and a small cock.

aww, poor dumb angry assclown needs attention cause in "real life" he gets pissed on. how funny

i'll give you attention you little puppet-o-mine. lol what's the matter? what happened to your awesome band that you are in where you are always playing gigs, going out, and getting laid?? rofl you sure spend a WHOLE lot of time at this site talking crap and posting gay porn pics, to be so involved in a band... or to have ANY life other than the make believe you talk about here.

just another nobody outed in a forum for being a fat little bald headed old man pretending to be some cool ladies man in a band. lol, yeah, cause so many chicks are into fat, smelly nerds who spend every waking moment trying to impress geeks at a half-life forum with pics of man arse.

lol i love watching you self-destruct like that... and i'll be here to see this site flourish after you're gone with no one remembering anything about the pathetic little speck of shit known as peace of shit...

Wow, that was an angry rant, I thought it was over?

And I post during the day, because I "work", and soem evenings when I'm mapping or playing HI/AA.
Weekends are my own, to practice, play, or even... get this.. whack off!
So you don't believe me, awwwwwwwwwww www.christianblood.tk

downloading goes extraordinary slow for som reason.. But i'll have a look at in as soon as it is downloaded. that would be in like 10 min

Not a valid archive :S Strange

"just accept the fact that the map is pretty bad and try to learn from the constructive criticism you have recieved."

Read what you wrote before that... Do you really call that constructive?

Thank you for your comment, we take all criticism to heart. And it is a pleasure to award you a kick in the ass.
Good day!

Ok guys i hate to get in the way but lets not get silly

lol i loved kicking your ass up out your mouth... fag... heheheheheheehehehehehheeeeeehaaaa. and what a douche bag you are... making a phony account and calling yourself "mercenary"... lol pathetic turd

oh and your sad, sorry little crap-maps still blow.. too bad