Commented 18 years ago2005-09-21 17:54:54 UTCComment #9102
Quite a nice start! This map is obviously largely unfinished, so I won't point out the obvious stuff.
+interesting layout +I love the glass atrium thingy! nice job +love the cop cars! +nice-looking hinged window +nice-looking stairs +nice texturing and architecture -lighting is weird in places. I'd recommend using texture lighting except where point lighting is a necessity--flickering stuff, rotating, etc. -place clip brush(s) just behind the cop cars, so you can still walk atop them, but not behind--they look weird on the other side!
CS
Three stars. A good first map.
+interesting layout
+I love the glass atrium thingy! nice job
+love the cop cars!
+nice-looking hinged window
+nice-looking stairs
+nice texturing and architecture
-lighting is weird in places. I'd recommend using texture lighting except where point lighting is a necessity--flickering stuff, rotating, etc.
-place clip brush(s) just behind the cop cars, so you can still walk atop them, but not behind--they look weird on the other side!
Finish this!