Jasons Rock, My First Real Map

Hey, for a first map that was excellent! And no, im not trying to be nice, that was genuinly really good for a first map! Those tables where good, the lighting was interesting and the light fitting from the roof was very nice too. And also the elevator with the switch was clever. For a first map I give you 5 stars! Everyone else's first map was a one textured full-bright room with maybe a gun lying on the floor. This map actualy had detail and good lighting. Well done

Yeah, pretty darn good for a first try.

Try changing the color of the light in your next map, and also rotate the tables and other objects in your map slightly so not everything is orthogonal to each other.

Look good for the first try I'm downloading it!

Thank you all! Thank you for your encouragment and advice! I'm going to make sure I use it to its full potential.

Don't use capital letters when naming maps/entities.

Also use simpler names! You could have named the bsp file "jr".

Ohh...I didn't know..I'm always bad with names anyway. Thanks...i'll keep that in mind

Ohh...it's an RMF thats why I couldn't play it! Whoops

Ok how did that heppen it posted the samething three times!

I'd prefer a .bsp file over a .rmf...

Actually, I think it's good for a first map. My first one was a L-shaped corner... not that I ever showed that to anyone except for my family, but hey...
Anyway. There's a leak in the .rmf you uploaded. I'd recommend mapping with Snap to Grid on, and using a rough grid size for the base architecture (something like a 32 or 64 size). It's easier to prevent leaks that way. When dealing with detail, you can switch to lower grid sizes quickly with the [ and ] keys.
Give that ladder a Render FX - Solid, and a Render Amount - 255 to make the black parts invisible.

Other than that, keep going, and post .bsp's next time.

include the bsp i cant dl it now i will later tho

Looks interesting, im downloading it!

It's a first map, great job

I liked the details!

Im giving you a 3 of 5, just for motivation to be better ^^

Good luck!

Thank you! Motivation is always welcome! I appreciate it! ^_^

Just keep on mapping, i want to see more from you

Include .bsp for the lazy ones like me!

the upturned chair looks nice from the screenie

Thank you! ^^

Neat stuff, especially for a first map!

I liked the detailed chair pushables and the tables, and the whole place reminded me of my freind's hunting cabin! I also liked how random this map is, sort of like letting your subconsious flow into hammer, at least that's what it made me think of. Interesting red lighting too, and the flickering reminded me of lightning!

Nice job!

Thanks! Your detailed description of my map made me want to play it haha. I haven't been on this site or made a map in sooo long...i feel terrible about it.

but thank you for your compliments!