sk_Sniper

Judging frm the screenshot, it looks like you need to work on your mapping skills a little more. Spend some time on a map and keep asking for critique.

One word: Tutorials

They are on your menu bar to the left, it is best to start on the real basics before making a map like this that has many problems.

I wouldn't be so harsh if you hadn't commented on both your OWN maps.

Its shit. Its a box, its 4 textures. Its appaulingly bad and doesnt deserve to be in the map vault.

Dont submit maps until you can at least create a series of rooms connected by corridoors. Nobody will download this, especially since you commented on your own map

I'm sure not going to download it. Commenting on your own map and saying it's excellent is one of the lowest things you can do... why do people do that stuff anyway? Do they think we can't read the names above the comments?

Might have two accounts, and thought that he was logged on to the other one? ??

I ain't gonna d-load this one ether.
Not because of the screenshot, not because of the comments above.
I simply don't got CS

"excellent map ihave never seen this before"

I could't agree more!

Um, ok what the hell. Not much to comment about for this map, but I must say I liked the "red" part with the double levels. Paste in one of your nicely consructed func_ladders, and make a nice terrace on the roof!

The "grey" side is 3 walls with windows in them--which were quite nice btw! This side needs something. Anything.

If you're going to make a map like this, I would recommend including some func_vehicles like in de_starwars or he_offroad. Maybe include some func_tanks of some kind of gimmick, or stronger theme!

Can't wait for your next map in the sk series

Argh, dont comment on your own map please. Please read tutorials before making a map. Its very cubic. I could make it in 3 minutes. It gets what it deserves. One star. But, if you practice and READ you can become a great mapper. I look foward to your next map when you learn abit more

Hmm...strange...a rookie map and it gets more reviews than my map

Just try giving praise to your own, and you'll get people flocking all over it!

It's just easier to give bad comments then good ones/moderatly good ones. Rowleybob do you always give good comments or what.

Sarwan, you are only a begginer, maybe you aren't a great mapper now, but if you'll try you'll quickly turn to be a great one.

Only by looking at the screenshot.... I TOTALLY AGREE with The Hunter.....
Remembering his words..."Its shit. Its a box, its 4 textures. Its appaulingly bad and doesnt deserve to be in the map vault."
I can't describe it more perfectly.......

Just two words now: IT SUCKS

Oh well, you should have seen MY first maps. eugh!

Don't post your second map.

sorry, but as above - get used to mapping a bit more, then start posting, this should be in the unfinished vault - not worth a play!