As this is my first map I made sure to include a staircase, a ladder, a button, a door and several enemies. Constructive critism would be really helpful, thanks
Commented 18 years ago2006-06-25 04:42:50 UTCComment #12366
Pretty damn amazing if this is your first map ever. You actually have GASP detail! Nice lights and little stuff like that. Great use of entitys too. If you already know this much, you should try making better (real) stuff...
You need to put a roof on it though, or else you'll get that ugly hall-of-mirrors (HOM) effect, and there could be some other problems if you made a bigger map. You need to sort out the scale problems too, that one door you had was way too small to walk through.
Commented 18 years ago2006-06-25 04:56:44 UTCComment #12367
Yeah I know, I actually had to cut out a piece from above the door and make it func_illusionary so you can walk through it, lol. I'll put a screenshot up now. Also, my favroite bits are the warning stripes on and around the staircase and around the ladder (warning stripes are cool).
You need to put a roof on it though, or else you'll get that ugly hall-of-mirrors (HOM) effect, and there could be some other problems if you made a bigger map. You need to sort out the scale problems too, that one door you had was way too small to walk through.
Also, my favroite bits are the warning stripes on and around the staircase and around the ladder (warning stripes are cool).
I love the lighting and the idea of the map.
Only minus is the HOM effect on the ceiling, but points for added "psychedelicness" lol
You're right too...warning stripes are pretty pwn.
WARNING STRIPES AND BOLSHEVISM FTW!