Journal #5394

Put some work on the lightning and it might turn out pretty good

Number 3 looks really strange. For how straight even and linear that green water or whatever is, its weird that there is nothing containing it, i think you should lower the ground where its at to make it look like its flowing through a canal type thing.

Also the way it turns, maybe drop it down like a short waterfall there its not as weird.

Some nice brushwork in screenie 2.

But I absolutely agree with saw, that water in screenie 3 looks horrible at this stage.

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@saw:
"Number 3 looks really strange. For how straight even and linear that green water or whatever is, its weird that there is nothing containing it, i think you should lower the ground where its at to make it look like its flowing through a canal type thing."

Dude. the water is 2 units lower than the floor. better yet, it has a 8 unit trench wich creates the effect of acid errosion. whats wrong with that?

@AT:
Ty, and why horrible? you havent seen the whole room.

@penguinboy:
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Oh god, ce centre serveur est horrible!

Skals, i would lower that water trench to make it more obvious. There are some fine HL textures in halflife.wad to simulate corrosion. I see no corrosion at all on the third screenshot.

What everyone else said, especially about lighting being very poor ('cept for screenie 4, it's pretty nice there).

Arcitecture is pretty decent, though could use some more detail in screenies 5 (good to see you're paying attention to ceiling detail) and 6 (more vertical stuff like beams and pipes to break up the horizontal detail).

Texturing's alright, though I personally find that metal trim texture applied to the sides of that hole in Scrn. 3 pretty unfitting. If you were to extend those vertical supports through that hole, it'd look so much better imo.

Keep up the good work.