Dr. Mapper
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The combines end -Comic
Created 19 years ago2005-06-25 13:43:40 UTC by
Dr. Mapper
Created 19 years ago2005-06-25 13:43:40 UTC by
Dr. Mapper
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 13:43:40 UTC
Post #117077
Hello. I would like to show you guys here at TWHL a comic I made. Rate it or Hate it. See if I care
Dr. Mapper
PS : Rate it anyway
Dr. Mapper
PS : Rate it anyway
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 14:03:38 UTC
Post #117078
Wierd.
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 14:15:06 UTC
Post #117082
so where's the comic? maybe i can't see pics again :/
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 14:28:08 UTC
Post #117084
unusual that it just trails of but pretty cool overall 
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 15:11:35 UTC
Post #117094
SpaG, The comic is there, in pictures. Do you have FireFox? Use that, it may help. If you have it, well, I dunno
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 15:34:25 UTC
Post #117097
Well it... sux...
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 16:05:48 UTC
Post #117107
Why does it suck? God man! WHY does it suck? Just saying "Well it... sux..." does not tell me what you don't like about it! OKay, then ending of this issue is a bit weak. But in the later issues you will find out about why his flat is lock. If you read a comic, it does tell you the whole story in one issue! Yes, I know it is short, but What is wrong!
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 16:41:32 UTC
Post #117112
I'm not being horrible Red, but, can you please tell me what's wrong
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 17:09:51 UTC
Post #117118
Nah that is really good because:
It is clear
Posing is good
Bubbles are greatly shaped and easy to read
I can't get over how well it looks and the way it just looks so neat!
Well done!
Red just give him an answer instead of saying crap like that...You may be in a bad mood but later on your gonna laugh at yourself for being a jackass
Think about stuff before getting angry or can't be asked to write...In fact don't write a reply if your lazy.
Anyway again Dr Mapper well done! Must have taken you a while and I like the suspense! Make more
It is clear
Posing is good
Bubbles are greatly shaped and easy to read
I can't get over how well it looks and the way it just looks so neat!
Well done!
Red just give him an answer instead of saying crap like that...You may be in a bad mood but later on your gonna laugh at yourself for being a jackass
Think about stuff before getting angry or can't be asked to write...In fact don't write a reply if your lazy.
Anyway again Dr Mapper well done! Must have taken you a while and I like the suspense! Make more
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 17:13:33 UTC
Post #117122
...comic means funny.. this isnt funny. this is a.. well i dunnom but comics means funny
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 17:17:10 UTC
Post #117124
How are they funny? I was reading a Spiderman Comic and it was not funny what so ever :/
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 17:39:14 UTC
Post #117132
This is a pseudo-serious/corky/humor Comic, I think.
It might be more of a Graphic-Novel kind of thing, though.
It might be more of a Graphic-Novel kind of thing, though.
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 18:13:37 UTC
Post #117134
It's good to see people like my work. The next Issue is when "Tom" gets ready for the battle with the combine, but he does not know the power of the dark side
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 18:57:49 UTC
Post #117139
Pretty good. More action, raise the brightness.
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 19:01:15 UTC
Post #117140
i dont get it?
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-25 20:24:21 UTC
Post #117146
funny
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 01:39:01 UTC
Post #117158
darks side? He doesnt know the power of the dark side??? You mean he can have a lightsaber to fight them
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 04:32:15 UTC
Post #117182
yeah, raise the brightness and gamma srtting for the next 'issue'
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 05:24:00 UTC
Post #117188
shit u must have been bored
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 07:55:33 UTC
Post #117206
It was a joke about the darkside guys
No, Strider, I was not bored, I find it fun to make comics
No, Strider, I was not bored, I find it fun to make comics
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 08:02:10 UTC
Post #117207
It's extrimly fun. I'm draw every minute when I'm in school!
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 08:12:06 UTC
Post #117209
extrimly?
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 08:13:04 UTC
Post #117210
I'm a quite a bad speller on the internet! 
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 08:23:33 UTC
Post #117211
K guys, here it is, Issue 2. Sorry about the posing in this one, I am not happy with it, but it is the best I can do!
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 08:32:54 UTC
Post #117212
I can't see this one too! Maybe because I'm not using firefox(or something)!
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 08:45:06 UTC
Post #117213
download firefox, see if that works
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 09:17:31 UTC
Post #117218
Does anyone have any tips for improvement? I kno Jamie looks a bit...well...crap :
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 09:23:58 UTC
Post #117219
In some of the pictures, Tom and Jamie looks a bit unnatural. But I like it, it has a very cartoony feeling to it. Gj
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 09:37:29 UTC
Post #117221
the... what is it called in english? "talk-bubbles?" Are placed in some strange oder. Anyway they're fun
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 10:18:21 UTC
Post #117225
:> Reminds me of Max Payne somehow ;D
Make more!
Make more!
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 10:41:08 UTC
Post #117229
yes i have firefox but i don't see any pics
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 10:58:18 UTC
Post #117234
AWESOME! MAKE MORE
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 11:14:00 UTC
Post #117235
THis really does suck.
Its hard to follow the lines in order and its just made with HL2SP and not something like garrys mod ro make it what you want. Well, i gess some of it is but then some of the SP screens is just random.
Its hard to follow the lines in order and its just made with HL2SP and not something like garrys mod ro make it what you want. Well, i gess some of it is but then some of the SP screens is just random.
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 12:01:37 UTC
Post #117247
Hmmm, does any one else have trouble finding out the order...
And the only things that are not posed are
The guy sitting at the table.
The people on the sofa sobbing
And the two people chatting at the beginning.
The people sobbing are part of the story because they are upset that the combine are coming. The two guys are chatting about stuff, but then Tom has to go home. He finds his Apartment Door is locked by the COmbine. He goes to find his brother to see if he can get rid of the lock. Jamie (His brother) tells him there is a gun under the sofa, and to try shooting the lock. Then the combine come cos' of the miscount. Whats not to understand. I really feel quite hurt by the comment "THis really does suck."
And the only things that are not posed are
The guy sitting at the table.
The people on the sofa sobbing
And the two people chatting at the beginning.
The people sobbing are part of the story because they are upset that the combine are coming. The two guys are chatting about stuff, but then Tom has to go home. He finds his Apartment Door is locked by the COmbine. He goes to find his brother to see if he can get rid of the lock. Jamie (His brother) tells him there is a gun under the sofa, and to try shooting the lock. Then the combine come cos' of the miscount. Whats not to understand. I really feel quite hurt by the comment "THis really does suck."
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 12:02:45 UTC
Post #117248
And this is my first ever comic. I think I did quite well.
Mercenary, we call them "speach bubbles" Close though!
Mercenary, we call them "speach bubbles" Close though!
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 12:13:30 UTC
Post #117251
Oh come on, give the guy a chance you miserable bastards!
I think it's a good start, kinda like a graphic novel - the idea works.
Besides, a comic does not require humour, only a decent story...
I think it's a good start, kinda like a graphic novel - the idea works.
Besides, a comic does not require humour, only a decent story...
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 12:19:15 UTC
Post #117252
The order in which one reads the "bubbles" is from top left to bottom right. this is standard. It would help if you wrote them like that Dr.Mapper
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 12:32:20 UTC
Post #117253
k. I just figured something, where he says. "There is only one person who can get rid of this...". That sentence has nothing to do with when he says "...Combine". I am sorry for this silly mistake. when he says "There is only..."
he meant his brother, which is in the next scene. Sorry about that IEMC.
he meant his brother, which is in the next scene. Sorry about that IEMC.
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 12:41:54 UTC
Post #117257
But still a good idea
Can't wait to see the whole book
Can't wait to see the whole book
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 13:05:22 UTC
Post #117268
It is coming along nicely. Hmmm, Habboi, you have just given me a idea...a book... I will put all the Issues togeather at some stage.
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 14:35:29 UTC
Post #117284
Okay guys, here it is. This one has a real cliffhanger ending!
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 15:13:51 UTC
Post #117291
>:o
ok lol
ok lol
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 15:25:59 UTC
Post #117296
What's funny?
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 15:45:39 UTC
Post #117306
No really, what's funny?! 
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 15:51:08 UTC
Post #117307
Ha ha some great poses...
I can't take the suspense :S It's killing me!
I bet a car full of soft matresses drives under him and the driver is Jamie
I can't take the suspense :S It's killing me!
I bet a car full of soft matresses drives under him and the driver is Jamie
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 16:08:22 UTC
Post #117309
OMG FRIGGIN GOD HABBOI!! You got it right!!!!! Apart from it's not Jamie driving it!! ARGGG! Now I have to think up a new way for him to survive!
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 16:23:21 UTC
Post #117311
How about a scanner slies under him and he grabs it and it flies way...
Or he just dies?
Or he falls on a zombie
Falls on a monk...
Or he just dies?
Or he falls on a zombie
Falls on a monk...
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 16:24:39 UTC
Post #117312
Great stuff!!!!! Ive read chapter 2 and 3. Way cool, brilliant work dr.mapper. IEMC your being too harsh, how would people liked it if they dissed your comics/maps or what not?
shame really, because if he fell nearer to the lampost he could've grabbed it and slid down
shame really, because if he fell nearer to the lampost he could've grabbed it and slid down
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 17:10:16 UTC
Post #117320
good, except for some spelling errors
Posted 19 years ago2005-06-26 18:13:57 UTC
Post #117330
Now I can see the comics! Bahh...you should draw comics don't make them in the computer,it's much better! 
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