Enjoy!
(PS Please can you rate it like this
Posing - 1/3
Humore - 1/3
Editing - 1/3
Bonus - +1 - (reason here)
"Comment here")
A Combines Tale
Created 19 years ago2005-07-16 14:40:13 UTC by
Dr. Mapper
Created 19 years ago2005-07-16 14:40:13 UTC by
Dr. Mapper
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 14:40:13 UTC
Post #121271
This is not another retarded Combine Comic, it's about - wait, read the story to find out
Enjoy!
(PS Please can you rate it like this
Posing - 1/3
Humore - 1/3
Editing - 1/3
Bonus - +1 - (reason here)
"Comment here")
Enjoy!
(PS Please can you rate it like this
Posing - 1/3
Humore - 1/3
Editing - 1/3
Bonus - +1 - (reason here)
"Comment here")
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 14:41:33 UTC
Post #121272
PS - The red numbers in the speech bubbles tells you what order they are to be read in.
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 14:45:54 UTC
Post #121274
This one actually pretty good.
Was it supposed to be funny?
Was it supposed to be funny?
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 14:49:01 UTC
Post #121275
no
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 14:50:50 UTC
Post #121277
Stick with the old ones 
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 14:52:04 UTC
Post #121278
Yeah, the Combine's End was more interesting. You should make a website dedicated to your comics! Have your own online comic they would probably be pretty popular.
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 14:54:53 UTC
Post #121280
Yeah, I am working on THE COMBINES END comic, but I thought I'd do some side projects for the moment.
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 14:57:06 UTC
Post #121283
Thats pretty good!
If you want to make these more interesting, focus on more serious dialouge.
If you want to make these more interesting, focus on more serious dialouge.
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 14:58:41 UTC
Post #121284
more serious dialouge? I not quite sure what you mean... 
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 15:47:05 UTC
Post #121302
Maybe he means the dialogue seems strange for Combine troops. They should act more like a single conciousness and following straight orders (think about the Borg in StarTrek)
I dont think a Combine soldier would talk about taking a hot shower when he gets home, since he probably doesnt have a home and they arent really human (think about the stalkers we see in the last levels of the game). I didnt see hot showers in the Citadel !
I dont think a Combine soldier would talk about taking a hot shower when he gets home, since he probably doesnt have a home and they arent really human (think about the stalkers we see in the last levels of the game). I didnt see hot showers in the Citadel !
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 15:56:23 UTC
Post #121304
That is exactly what I meant 
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 15:59:09 UTC
Post #121306
Combine with Accuracy International weapons 
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 16:16:16 UTC
Post #121309
Stalkers? Are those what those this were that were making/fixing Gunships.
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 16:19:42 UTC
Post #121311
But where's the "speech bubble" number 4?! Oh where!?
..And the comic was OK ;o
Yeah, the Combine's End was more interesting. You should make a website dedicated to your comics! Have your own online comic they would probably be pretty popular.There are much better Garrysmod comics in Garrys forums ;o
..And the comic was OK ;o
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 16:23:49 UTC
Post #121313
My opinion of the stalkers from an older thread 
They are called stalkers, the citadel was full of them.
I guess they are humans in a transition state to combine. (there is a decal poster in HL2 illustrating a sort of evolution from a human head to a combine one)
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 16:27:46 UTC
Post #121314
[quote] But where's the "speech bubble" number 4?! Oh where!? [quote]
Opps, missed that one out, does not matter though.
Okay Kasperg, thx
Opps, missed that one out, does not matter though.
Okay Kasperg, thx
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 16:28:25 UTC
Post #121315
[quote] But where's the "speech bubble" number 4?! Oh where!? [quote]
Sorry about that
Sorry about that
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 16:36:16 UTC
Post #121319
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-16 17:10:52 UTC
Post #121343
Posing - 2/3
Humour - 0/3
Editing - 1/3
"The posing was decent in most parts but the one with speech #10 sucked hard..."
No funny...
Alright editing but.. meh... work on combines end
Humour - 0/3
Editing - 1/3
"The posing was decent in most parts but the one with speech #10 sucked hard..."
No funny...
Alright editing but.. meh... work on combines end
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-17 06:06:25 UTC
Post #121473
K guys, I'm working on THE COMBINES END. It's really hard thrying to think up what happens - I kinda make it up as I go along...I can get angry and tired when things go wrong 
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-17 07:03:26 UTC
Post #121483
and when guys like me guess what happens
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-17 09:28:34 UTC
Post #121519
Mmmmmm....when he falls a truck passes below him and escapes! Thats the best thing I could think on! 
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-17 09:57:09 UTC
Post #121529
nice comic, i rate...
2.5/3 for posing
0.5/3 for humour
2/3 for editing
I couldnt be to cruel and give you a 0. Its was pretty good, as in previous posts you missed out 4.
In the combine end, maybe you could make the character escape the fall by using his UBER MATRIX POWERS!!!
2.5/3 for posing
0.5/3 for humour
2/3 for editing
I couldnt be to cruel and give you a 0. Its was pretty good, as in previous posts you missed out 4.
In the combine end, maybe you could make the character escape the fall by using his UBER MATRIX POWERS!!!
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-17 10:12:28 UTC
Post #121533
While he falls he gripsa street light and hang on it! 
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-17 12:29:01 UTC
Post #121577
hehe i mentioned that idea awhile back on his 'combine end' thread.. 
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-17 13:20:20 UTC
Post #121601
I still can't beleive Habboi guessed it. you ruined it!!! evil Habboi!
You must be logged in to post a response.