my first map Created 19 years ago2005-07-29 12:52:30 UTC by profesore profesore

Created 19 years ago2005-07-29 12:52:30 UTC by profesore profesore

Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 12:52:30 UTC Post #124417
this is my first and unfinished map and i would like to know your opinion
the map is located in the "unfinished " and is named "myfirstmap"
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 12:55:26 UTC Post #124420
For everyone else here is the map's link.

Im not one to download and rate maps, so sorry.
Luke LukeLuke
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 12:56:43 UTC Post #124421
i was going to download it when i suddenly realised it was for CS. And the screenie looked worthwhile
38_98 38_98Lord
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 12:57:00 UTC Post #124422
tnks a lot Luke!
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 14:28:00 UTC Post #124475
Wow! I like the screeny.. Nice done.. But I will not download be cause it is for CS.. :P I don't play CS anymore.. >_<
Madcow MadcowSpy zappin my udder
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 14:32:47 UTC Post #124477
Right, here goes.

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Nice floor texture. The trim is nice. The walls and ceiling are terrible.

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Pointless dark corridor. Nice staircase; good banisters.

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Terrible face splitting there, making the lighting jagged. The best thing to do in this instance would probably be to move that wall a tiny bit away from the staircase. Alternatively, you could tie the entire staircase to a func_wall, but that might be a bad idea with such a large piece of architecture.

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Ceiling's a let-down again here. The walls lack any detail.

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Much better. Feels a lot like a car park under here. Better ceiling, too.

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Weird lighting on the strange box thing around the map. I'd suggest you use sky instead. Look at the Environment tutorial. That building with the glass is rather nice, but the bushes are a bit square.

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Nice, but you can fall off the edge of the map!

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The textures on the bottom of that look nasty. Rotate them using Texture Application mode. If you don't know how, read the tutorial on it.

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My favourite bit.
Seventh-Monkey Seventh-MonkeyPretty nifty
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 14:33:47 UTC Post #124478
And I don't have CS ;)
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 14:44:47 UTC Post #124480
thats a good look on the last one, i really like that. I quite like the police cars too
38_98 38_98Lord
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 14:59:42 UTC Post #124488
DUde, if your not gonna review it or you dont have CS dont make a post at all.

I only made a post so its easier for people to get to it.
Luke LukeLuke
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 15:22:17 UTC Post #124501
Tell me did you use onslaght's prefab for those cars? :aggrieved:
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 16:01:45 UTC Post #124510
i was about to say, those cars are definately prefabs.
Archie ArchieGoodbye Moonmen
Posted 19 years ago2005-07-29 16:03:53 UTC Post #124512
That last screenshot looks good, the others look crap.
ChickenFist ChickenFist<Witty Title>
Posted 19 years ago2005-08-02 10:53:11 UTC Post #125358
From the looks of it things seem to be pretty nice in this map. I'd like to check that out sometime :)
Posted 19 years ago2005-08-05 16:49:55 UTC Post #126158
Well I tested this map out finally and I must say its not all that bad. Whats with the sky? its like brick.

Also if it were bigger, that would be better too.
Posted 19 years ago2005-08-10 05:58:19 UTC Post #126929
the shadow in pic1 looks like 3dsmax shadowmap...

good job
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