It's Not Over... Until I say it is - Created 18 years ago2005-12-09 17:09:52 UTC by Dr. Mapper Dr. Mapper

Created 18 years ago2005-12-09 17:09:52 UTC by Dr. Mapper Dr. Mapper

Posted 18 years ago2005-12-09 17:09:52 UTC Post #151313
Hi folks! It's Dr. Mapper here with...
It's NOT Over until I say it is...
Prologue.
Kay, here are some notes that you must read:

One: THIS IS NOT ANOTHER "COMBINE FIGHTING/WAR" COMIC THINGY, It's more than that. I feel the story has not devolped enough in the prologue, but I left a kinda, cliff hanger, might you say.
More of the story will unfold

Two: Photoshop Bloom was used in this comic. It's my first comic with bloom, and I am testing it. Comment on this please.

Three: Thanks to l337Shazbot, I read is "isolation" tut, and I used it when the guy was kicked. (Off PHW)

Four: Enjoy!
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C&C Wanted. It takes ages to do every page :(

(PS. Combines end is coming!)
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-09 18:03:06 UTC Post #151327
i didn't entirely get page No. 4. I know he was kicking him, but he was also kneeling down...Or was he kicking him? I had no idea.

It also seemed a little confusing at first. Not to forget the large images, they seemed a little too big ;)

Although, i did like the speech, even if limited. :)

And also, why are you starting a new comic when you haven't finished your other one?
38_98 38_98Lord
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-09 18:05:27 UTC Post #151330
Remove the bloom. Atleast, decrease it a bit.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-09 18:08:28 UTC Post #151332
I gotta give you posing, grahpics, and looks.

A hell of a lot better than most.
Luke LukeLuke
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-09 18:22:46 UTC Post #151335
Pretty good.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-09 18:43:33 UTC Post #151345
I gotta agree with ZL, decrease the bloom so that it isn't nearly as distracting.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-09 18:56:11 UTC Post #151348
There are 2 page 1s and 1 page 3 and 4.

huh?

Looks nice, but it seems like its going in circles.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-09 18:59:00 UTC Post #151350
Citidel?

That little misspelling distracted from an otherwise nice comic page. The bloom doesn't really fit with the darker background I think, but apart from that it's a good comic. Keep it up. :)
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-09 22:58:08 UTC Post #151414
So this is the prologe then... How long will the normal comic be?, you have me interesed....
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-10 09:32:50 UTC Post #151469
Much Longer than this. It takes ages to do a page, roughly about a hour and a 1/2. That includes Posing, reposing, screenshots, editing, Making speech bubbles, fidderling with bloom etc.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-10 17:03:36 UTC Post #151540
Well, after comparing it to the other two similar webcomics from TWHL members (or was it three?) this is superbly great and looks stunning. Keep up the good work.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-10 17:25:28 UTC Post #151543
Arrghh...my eyes they're burning.....BLURMANIA. :aggrieved:

WHY DID YOU USE THOSE STUFF EXECTLY WHEN YOU DON'T NEED TOO, You finally placed a lansflare where it needs to be but why did you blur everything! You don't have to use photoshop on everything, something are better when they are left alone!!!
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-10 17:40:51 UTC Post #151544
An otherone? Lol!
There are different forumages at this forum.
Last age: "What are you currentry blaha age"
Current age: "RANDOM GARRY COMICS AGE"

W00ts!

Very nice comic though, I love the "blurmania", :P
Madcow MadcowSpy zappin my udder
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-10 17:46:21 UTC Post #151545
Yeah, the blur makes it look better.
ChickenFist ChickenFist<Witty Title>
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-10 18:29:39 UTC Post #151550
I ment the bloom... :lol: BLOOMMANIA :zonked:

edit:
Or does that mean the same...
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-10 18:46:01 UTC Post #151552
Blah, bloom is pretty much a blur filtered over the original image. Very easy effect.

The bloom looks ok, but you should decrease it, it really gets in your way.
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-11 10:58:53 UTC Post #151662
yeah, I'll tune down the bloom.
thx for all the neat comments
Posted 18 years ago2005-12-15 08:04:52 UTC Post #152400
WTF i dont get it it is a bit confusing good pictures though
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