Making Music Created 17 years ago2006-12-13 13:38:04 UTC by Sajo

Lo!
Here are some tracks I made, mostly Trance and Industrial.They are sort of my first tries.
Anyway if you enjoy weird music, give a try at these and leave comment if possible.As I said, I'm still new at this stuff so try to give some constructive criticisms instead of whining like they are all bad.

if you like at least one of them, I make a new track every month.So, check if you want to listen the new ones.

edit:Almost forgot, I used Fruity loops

Hope you guys enjoy

I haven't listened but im 100% sure they suck.

Unlike your maps Dorian, they might be not that bad.

Nope, Dorian was right.

They're shit.

Nope, Dorian was right

Dorian was being sarcastic, he doesnt even have any sound at his pc atm.

As I said, I'm still new at this stuff so try to give some constructive criticisms instead of whining like they are all bad.

They're shit.

I guess that explains it. I know they are bad you dumbfuck. Try to make some comments about how to improve it.

edit: well, anyway. I think, I'll re-post something after I work harder on some other new track.Because it doesnt seems to be going to get anywhere like this.

What'd you use to make them? Acid? Fruity Loops? EJay? Reason?

After listening to your tracks, though, they sound kind of disorganized, like you were trying to throw in whatever you could get your hands on. But I'm no music expert so I'm pretty much talking out of my ass.

I also recommend posting your music on Acidplanet and maybe posting in the forums. You're likely to get better reviews there because that's where all the good artists hang out.

You should really work on your rhythms and countermelodies(if you even put any in there). Most of the music sounded like random beats and staccato string hits. A nice bass line and a countermelody can really add to a song's "goodness".
Honestly I didn't think your current music was very good at all, but keep working on it. We all have to start somehwere.

worldcraft_dude said it all...
Man... They suck pretty bad. Add some rythm. Use patherns the song can follow. Add melodies, comps, drumms, bass...

It actualy is kind of bad for the first try.

But think of what we said and try again.

btw, sajo. Here is the first all electronic track I made in fruity loops:
http://tosse.dmusic.com/music/download/335603/.a2b8a80a

Hope the link works...

After listening to your tracks, though, they sound kind of disorganized, like you were trying to throw in whatever you could get your hands on. But I'm no music expert so I'm pretty much talking out of my ass.

No you are right, Boxtop. Someone else said the same thing as well.

You should really work on your rhythms and countermelodies(if you even put any in there). Most of the music sounded like random beats and staccato string hits.

Right, its very disorganized.

Cool Tosse, but however I dont think that its your first try or just you play guitar or something?

Thats the main problem for me actually, I'm not playing any instruments at all.So no music knowlodge at all.So consider it like I'm at the bottom level.But someone who plays an instrument would probably like start fruity loops in a middle level.

Like I said, it was my first try at an all electronic song, no real instruments. So yes, I've had some experience before that

Search for some scales and piano chords on the net, that would give you a whole lot. Also, try to start out with drums, then add to that.

Dude, stop pimping your musics.

Quick FLStudio songs ftw.

http://www.m0px.net/temp/ltk.mp3

Most of them have, like you said, a different sound, but the beat is hard to follow in most of them. Not too bad for your first try, but keep at it.
/2 cents