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Unforseen Consequences: Chapter 6 Created 17 years ago2007-05-07 17:58:16 UTC by Archie Archie

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Created 17 years ago2007-05-07 17:58:16 UTC by Archie Archie

Archie
Archie
Posted 17 years ago2007-05-07 17:58:16 UTC Post #221326
UNFORSEEN CONSEQUENCES
Chapter 6: 'New Diggs'
Comic 21

Maps used:
cafe_rosana.bsp

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Chapter 1: 'The Fugitive'

Comic 1
Comic 2
Comic 3
Comic 4

Chapter 2: 'Oil Hunt'

Comic 5
Comic 6
Comic 7
Comic 8

Chapter 3: 'Rational Explanation'

Comic 9
Comic 10
Comic 11

Chapter 4: 'In the Beginning'

Comic 12
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Comic 14

Chapter 5: 'Revenge'

Comic 15
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Comic 17
Comic 18
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Comic 20

Chapter 6: 'New Diggs'

Comic 21
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Habboi
Habboi
Posted 17 years ago2007-05-07 18:08:31 UTC Post #221333
Very nice. Bout time you worked on these again :)
Habboi HabboiSticky White Love Glue
Archie
Archie
Posted 17 years ago2007-05-07 18:21:31 UTC Post #221337
I just found out, through somebody I showed the latest one to that i did the first one in late 2005! December 10th at 2am.

If you look over the series, it's hillarious seeing the quality difference between then and now
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Rimrook
Rimrook
Posted 17 years ago2007-05-07 18:42:45 UTC Post #221341
Just the sight of Gman makes you consider doing a lot of things. lol.
Rimrook RimrookSince 2003
monster_urby
monster_urby
Posted 17 years ago2007-05-07 18:50:48 UTC Post #221345
ITS BACK!

Makes me want to GMod my bad self again.
monster_urby monster_urbyGoldsourcerer
Daubster
Daubster
Posted 17 years ago2007-05-08 07:51:06 UTC Post #221383
Woot! It's continuated!
The camera angles could've been toggled a bit more, but anyways - nice job. ^^
Daubster DaubsterVault Dweller
Trapt
Trapt
Posted 17 years ago2007-05-08 08:09:10 UTC Post #221384
Not funny and pretty lame tbh.
Trapt Traptlegend
Archie
Archie
Posted 17 years ago2007-05-08 08:10:11 UTC Post #221385
this one wasn't especially meant to be funny.. I was simply trying to set the story for the next few.
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kraken
kraken
Posted 17 years ago2007-05-08 08:11:16 UTC Post #221386
what the fux
kraken kraken
Archie
Archie
Posted 17 years ago2007-07-01 19:08:24 UTC Post #227061
UNFORSEEN CONSEQUENCES
Chapter 6: 'New Diggs'
Comic 22
Norman has myspace now!

Maps used:
cafe_rosana.bsp
User posted image
notes:
It's getting really difficult to move the story along and still include at least a little bit of humour. Oh well. once this story arc is over it should return to a more normal idea.
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Daubster
Daubster
Posted 17 years ago2007-07-02 10:48:03 UTC Post #227145
The posing's pretty decent and you've definately improved in angles though it doesn't look like he's really running in the first frame. You could also add a few frames to the beginning, explaining how the character got shot.
Anyways - hope you get through the arc soon.
Daubster DaubsterVault Dweller
Archie
Archie
Posted 17 years ago2007-07-02 18:12:26 UTC Post #227204
You could also add a few frames to the beginning, explaining how the character got shot.
If unforseen consequences should have tought you anything, it's that i like doing flashbacks. =]
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Archie
Archie
Posted 17 years ago2007-07-03 11:58:10 UTC Post #227245
UNFORSEEN CONSEQUENCES
Chapter 6: 'New Diggs'
Comic 23
Norman has myspace now!

Maps used:
cafe_rosana.bsp
cafe_rosana_bewm.bsp
User posted image
notes:

Star Wars references ftw. And in case it's difficult to tell, the two who say they love each other are NOT Norman and Rosana.. They're the couple who are shooting at the metrocops in panel 6.
Archie ArchieGoodbye Moonmen
monster_urby
monster_urby
Posted 17 years ago2007-07-03 12:06:21 UTC Post #227246
Norman seems to have the same expression through the whole thing.

Work on running poses. Norman and Rosana look like they're sneaking out.

Big explosion could have been moar impressive by adding furniture and things in mid flight as well as a big explosion using the huge model in the 'effects' tab.

Otherwise 'MOAR PLEEZ!'
monster_urby monster_urbyGoldsourcerer
Archie
Archie
Posted 17 years ago2007-07-03 12:08:37 UTC Post #227247
Norman seems to have the same expression through the whole thing.
shhh.
Archie ArchieGoodbye Moonmen
Madcow
Madcow
Posted 17 years ago2007-07-03 12:18:22 UTC Post #227249
I liked it, but you might need to put a bit more detail into every frame.
Madcow MadcowSpy zappin my udder
Daubster
Daubster
Posted 17 years ago2007-07-04 11:42:17 UTC Post #227346
Norman seems to have the same expression through the whole thing.
At least he tried to hide that on the last 2 frames. :P
Posing needs moar work and as Urb said, the explosion could use some debris flying around.

MOAR PLIEZE?
Daubster DaubsterVault Dweller
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