I haven't decided if I should make this for real, but I made some concept art and a two page long comic test. So tell me what you think about this:
BANG BANG .45 (comic)
Created 17 years ago2007-11-14 20:24:18 UTC by
Tosse
Created 17 years ago2007-11-14 20:24:18 UTC by
Tosse
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-14 20:24:18 UTC
Post #238494
Ok, I got rather bored with the suburbian concept in Suburb: 47, it wasn't very fun during the creaton. But Whitey lives on, I got some inspiration from some of my favorite movies and I cam up with a new concept. It's more of a spinoff from Suburb: 47.
I haven't decided if I should make this for real, but I made some concept art and a two page long comic test. So tell me what you think about this:The Comic test:Enjoy!
I haven't decided if I should make this for real, but I made some concept art and a two page long comic test. So tell me what you think about this:
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-14 20:41:06 UTC
Post #238496
HAHA awesome.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-14 20:56:25 UTC
Post #238499
You seem pretty good with (Photoshop?) effects. I liked it although I think the english on this part could be better:
"And that is by blowing the brains out on some of them zombies." Although the character may talk like that I think it seems a bit too realistic and puts me off. I actually got taken away from the comic because it didn't sound right. I think maybe this would have been better:
"And that is by blowing the brains out of some zombies." or something similar.
Keep it up ^^
"And that is by blowing the brains out on some of them zombies." Although the character may talk like that I think it seems a bit too realistic and puts me off. I actually got taken away from the comic because it didn't sound right. I think maybe this would have been better:
"And that is by blowing the brains out of some zombies." or something similar.
Keep it up ^^
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-14 21:15:10 UTC
Post #238503
Yeah, you may be right about that... Thanks Habboi!
Alltough I don't think I'll change it untill I decide if I should continue this.
And Testu0!
...And yes, it's Photoshop
Alltough I don't think I'll change it untill I decide if I should continue this.
And Testu0!
...And yes, it's Photoshop
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-14 21:17:52 UTC
Post #238505
The art is brilliant. Good work.
Story is simple, which I like.
Story is simple, which I like.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-14 21:29:51 UTC
Post #238506
Well, Tosse has emerged from his little cave again! And this time he brought eye-candy!
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-14 21:38:00 UTC
Post #238507
And Testu0!What?
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-14 21:54:30 UTC
Post #238508
He was thanking you.
HAHA awesome.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-14 22:22:02 UTC
Post #238509
ahh
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 03:05:06 UTC
Post #238521
Text is too hard to read.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 06:41:00 UTC
Post #238526
Thanks guys! I might continue this after all!
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 07:58:34 UTC
Post #238528
Awesome!
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 09:28:45 UTC
Post #238531
Very nice.
Looks very convincing.
Looks very convincing.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 09:47:15 UTC
Post #238532
By the way I like the dark bits under your eyes. Kinda looks gothic and suits the comics art style.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 10:47:22 UTC
Post #238538
Yeah, He's a worn out hitman who's currently on drugs, alcohol and all kinds of shit, so that's pretty much the reason for the dark eyes! 
But that last image looks kinda like something from 'Clockwork Orange'. So I might go down that road... What do you think?
The posted images are, as I said, only concept art and a test of the comic. So feel free to make suggestions and tell me about the up's and down's about the comic style.
But that last image looks kinda like something from 'Clockwork Orange'. So I might go down that road... What do you think?
The posted images are, as I said, only concept art and a test of the comic. So feel free to make suggestions and tell me about the up's and down's about the comic style.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 17:00:57 UTC
Post #238559
It's original. I like how this feels like it's a really old stained comic printed on actual paper. Not that fancy glossy stuff.
I do feel, however, that if you're going to actually do this. Each individual comic should have more content. Not just episodic one-liners with lead-in cliffhangers.
BUT
I like.
Very much so.
I do feel, however, that if you're going to actually do this. Each individual comic should have more content. Not just episodic one-liners with lead-in cliffhangers.
BUT
I like.
Very much so.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 17:49:31 UTC
Post #238564
Another suggestion would be not to use that puny little pistol. If Whitey's a hitman - equip him with Berettas, light SMGs, etc, not butterknifes and slingshots.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 17:51:18 UTC
Post #238565
Yeah, I've already thought about that. You see, if I decide to make this, I'd write a script and have a clear and simple storyline to follow. So it would have a beginning and an end... So it would take a hell of a long time to make it, I was thinking about 50 - 100 pages. And just release previews, concept art and stuff like that untill the whole thing is done.
And when it's done I was thinking about printing a few copies, just for fun. You see, I have a part-time job and I still live with my family untill I get a real job so that I can support myself, so right now I have all this money that I just don't know what to do with, so I thought this could be a fun idea, you know.
And when it's done I was thinking about printing a few copies, just for fun. You see, I have a part-time job and I still live with my family untill I get a real job so that I can support myself, so right now I have all this money that I just don't know what to do with, so I thought this could be a fun idea, you know.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 18:35:12 UTC
Post #238567
Story lines are OK, just make it so each comic can stand on it's own.
No one likes comics where you have to see the beginning to know WTF is going on.
No one likes comics where you have to see the beginning to know WTF is going on.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 18:51:17 UTC
Post #238568
Tosse save your money. I lived that life once and i wish i still did. Seriously. Be as frugal as you can with your cash.
But it's good you're thinking about a script.
im excited now
But it's good you're thinking about a script.
im excited now
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 19:43:30 UTC
Post #238571
whitey -
a mix between Elwood Blues, Agent 47, Indiana Jones & Duke Nukem.
awesome xD
a mix between Elwood Blues, Agent 47, Indiana Jones & Duke Nukem.
awesome xD
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-15 19:55:18 UTC
Post #238572
It's not a puny little pistol! It's a Makarov, russian quality pistol!
And I've got one, so it's the best I can do!
But I could buy some toy-guns...
But I could buy some toy-guns...
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-16 00:21:26 UTC
Post #238587
Or u can use a paint-ball marker
cough
cough
cough
cough
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-16 00:35:23 UTC
Post #238589
haha, assassins dont play tiddledywinks with puny little peashooters like that!
photoshop yourself an AK or something
photoshop yourself an AK or something
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-16 00:37:18 UTC
Post #238590
airsoft pistols are relatively cheap for spring-action, i mean you're only using it for prop anyways...
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-16 01:52:42 UTC
Post #238603
yeah. 12 USD for a decent one.
Some of them look like DEAGLES
And try flea markets.
They usually have cheap Chinese Airsoft ones.
you know.. the ones that come with assembly instructions printed in chinese on rice paper...
Some of them look like DEAGLES
And try flea markets.
They usually have cheap Chinese Airsoft ones.
you know.. the ones that come with assembly instructions printed in chinese on rice paper...
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-16 09:02:39 UTC
Post #238616
Yeah, that's a good idea! I might buy one of them BB Desert Eagle guns... Or just a cheap toy-gun that looks like a Desert Eagle .45. Then he would have some connection to the comic name!
Anyone got any other suggestions for a big-ass gun to arm Whitey with?
So that he can strike fear into the little black, dead Zombiehearts!
And also, they dude that was going to be the "brutal fag" in Suburb: 47 loved BB.45, he wants in on it. So I'll introduce a new character soon, a raging punk-rocker with a epileptic triggerfinger!
Anyone got any other suggestions for a big-ass gun to arm Whitey with?
So that he can strike fear into the little black, dead Zombiehearts!
And also, they dude that was going to be the "brutal fag" in Suburb: 47 loved BB.45, he wants in on it. So I'll introduce a new character soon, a raging punk-rocker with a epileptic triggerfinger!
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-16 12:59:33 UTC
Post #238619
Any room for a hotel manager?
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-18 14:11:30 UTC
Post #238755
You got it!
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-18 14:21:37 UTC
Post #238756
I am loving this. On the effects side, less coffee moar blood!
As for a weapon, CROWBARRRRRRRRR, arrr... Honour your Black Mesian heritage! Or a machete or something, melee weapons are cool.
As for a weapon, CROWBARRRRRRRRR, arrr... Honour your Black Mesian heritage! Or a machete or something, melee weapons are cool.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-18 14:43:26 UTC
Post #238757
Honour your Black Mesian heritage!Tosse thinks HL is "one of the worst FPS games ever" :
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-19 22:43:24 UTC
Post #238842
This is true. :
If it wasn't for his awesome Photoshop skills and his involvment with Demonic Puppy I would say he sucked.
If it wasn't for his awesome Photoshop skills and his involvment with Demonic Puppy I would say he sucked.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-19 22:49:22 UTC
Post #238843
Which still doesn't make sense as to why he is here on TWHL. But... it doesn't bother me... so. =P
Big-ass gun? m249 S.A.W. (Squad Automatic Weapon, and my initials...)
Big-ass gun? m249 S.A.W. (Squad Automatic Weapon, and my initials...)
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-20 14:09:54 UTC
Post #238873
Im at TWHL because I love to map! I don't have to love HL to map for it! 
Ok, so here's my list of things I need to get:
1. A green-screen. Right now Im using a big red background, but the editing process would be easier with a greenscreen.
2. Toy guns, gun replicas and stuff like that. Please do suggest what guns you think I should look for, Im not a gun freak, so if we have any gunfreaks around, please provide links to kickass guns.
3. Modelcars, small scale model of musclecars.
Then I'd have pretty much everything I need to make the comic look better and it would be easier to create.
I don't have to love HL to map for it! Ok, so here's my list of things I need to get:
1. A green-screen. Right now Im using a big red background, but the editing process would be easier with a greenscreen.
2. Toy guns, gun replicas and stuff like that. Please do suggest what guns you think I should look for, Im not a gun freak, so if we have any gunfreaks around, please provide links to kickass guns.
3. Modelcars, small scale model of musclecars.
Then I'd have pretty much everything I need to make the comic look better and it would be easier to create.
Posted 17 years ago2007-11-21 13:20:08 UTC
Post #238947
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