Journal #7589

Posted 7 years ago2012-01-25 16:59:55 UTC
Skals SkalsGame / Level Designer
Hello twhl, I recently made an animation for one of my college units, and I need some form of audience feedback/response on it. I uploaded it to youtube so you guys can check it out, please drop me a constructive comment on the youtube page or here telling me what you taught of it, don't expect anything amazing. Here it is:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b2mWugh25wc&feature=youtu.be

Like I said I want an audience response and that's all, I will not be making any changes to it, because it's already finished and now I'm on a different task which requires me to ask people what they taught of it and then evaluate their responses.

7 Comments

Commented 7 years ago2012-01-25 17:09:22 UTC Comment #55317
You might want to properly loop some of the sounds, and make the video more fluent. Nice animation.
Commented 7 years ago2012-01-25 18:14:35 UTC Comment #55319
What the heck is this.
Commented 7 years ago2012-01-25 21:23:05 UTC Comment #55320
Cool, for a first animation its pretty good. Stojke likes :>
Commented 7 years ago2012-01-26 00:49:37 UTC Comment #55316
Argrees with stojkens, a not-bad first go.

I think the only distraction for me were that the text seemed really low res and generic font, when you could have used a much nicer one, and also you can barely see it when it turns red, i.e., turn up the congrast a little.

I also think the first scene could be a shot of the whole city and way more detailed/polished/contrasty, since it is the first thing viewers see.
Commented 7 years ago2012-01-26 01:12:37 UTC Comment #55314
User posted image
Commented 7 years ago2012-01-26 07:14:07 UTC Comment #55315
Thanks for the comments guys!
Except for Dimbark. I like how I support him when he has these little projects and then he just puts some crap like "terrible" in the comments box -.-
Commented 7 years ago2012-01-26 13:05:13 UTC Comment #55318
I don't know where did you get that gif. Rimrook, but I'm saving it :). Where did Dimbark comment, btw?

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